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From: ffml-bounce@anifics.com [mailto:ffml-bounce@anifics.com] On

Behalf

Of William O'Halloran
Sent: Saturday, August 16, 2003 6:58 AM
To: ffml@anifics.com; Beth; Nuki_mouse
Subject: [FFML] [FFML][Spamfic] "Demon"

  I wrote this for the weekly Fanfiction Challenge at Live Journal's

Anime

100.  The Challenge was to write in exactly 100 words, a story base on

the

topic "Facing Down Your Nemesis"
  I thought it turned out pretty good but I'm biased, so I'm posting

it

here to see what the FFML community thought of it.  C&C is greatly
desired.

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Demon

A whisper of sound caused him to turn and spy the demon slowly

stalking

him.

Hair covered its body, its claw's were razor sharp and inhuman eyes

glowed

bright as it watched his every move.

Terror griped his soul and the demon sensed it, it wanted to "play."

griped : gripped. 

He knew if he ran, it would be on him in seconds, driving him insane.

He must face it and show no fear. He was a man, not a mouse!

It approached and for once, he struck first.

Now what do I do? Thought Ranma, holding the kitten at arms length.

Thought : thought

**********

Well, what do you think?

Short, and to the point - but that was fairly given, considering the 100
word limit. A couple of the sentence constructions look like they really
needed an extra word or two, but that'd break the limit, so I'll guess
I'll have to look the other way...

Otherwise, it's a cute little fic.

SP



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