************
Eve

I hate this, she thought, hand washing her silks in cold water. A knock

came and her fianc�e stood in the doorway.

- Maybe "I hate this, Ranma thought, (etc)" The first time I read through, I
thought the first she was Akane.

"Come on, its time!," dragging her outside into the full moon's light.

Quickly they scrambled up onto the roof.

Oh shit, I forgot, she realized as she looked down at herself as they

reached their favorite spot, I can't do it like THIS!

- This could go even shorter by writing it as "Oh shit, I forgot, she
realized, looking down at herself as they (etc)" but I think you're still
under 100 words anyway.

"Here, I brought it." Her fianc�e poured the cure to her condition over

her.

Hot water flowed over him and Ranma leaned down to kiss Akane as the bells

rang in the New Year.

- ^-^ Very cute.

************

Yes, I did it 100 words! All five conditions, but I have to admit I played

a little loose with #3, using Ranma's reaction to cold water as an allergy.

- Good job. The allergy bit being replaced by the curse is creative. He DOES
have a severe reaction to cold or hot water, anyway. I guess it depends on
what the definition of an allergy is.

>From www.dictionary.com:

al-ler-gy
  1.. An abnormally high sensitivity to certain substances, such as pollens,
foods, or microorganisms. Common indications of allergy may include
sneezing, itching, and skin rashes.
  2.. Informal. An adverse sentiment; antipathy: an allergy to cocktail
parties.
- It works, I'd think, according to this.

- Denise


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