Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Ranma/Love Hina/Goldenboy] Chapter 09: Winter Performance (Part One)
From: Brian Randall
Date: 8/14/2003, 11:06 PM
To: Michael A Chase
CC: Innocent Bystanders <ffml@anifics.com>


Michael A Chase wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

	As always, unless otherwise commented, all suggestions have been used.

On Sat, 09 Aug 2003 16:17:23 -0700 Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org>
wrote:
 >
       Disclaimer: Paints in this story are from {: Rumiko} Takahashi, Viz (Ranma 1/2),
TV Tokyo and Ken Akamatsu (Love Hina), and Tatsuya Egawa (Goldenboy).
The story of the heroic legend of Raiko and Sakata Kintoki as presented
here is public domain. The easel is mine. That's all.

	I can't believe I missed that....

       "I can help with that, too!" Suu cheered, grinning. "I'll take the
leftover parts from my last experiment with Ranma, and make a
goblin-projector."

So her goblins will look like cats?  That could prove... interesting.

	Hmmm. I suppose that could be infered, actually, but wasn't what I had 
meant.

Ranma shrugged, dropping a hand into the water and pushing it back and
forth, sending out small waves that marched across the pond, vanishing
into the steam-shrouded reaches. "You can do things with it that are
harder to do with your bare hands," he said. "The... {hiryuu shouten-ha : Hiryuu Shouten-Ha},
for example.... The main reason to use it instead of a normal attack is
that you can use someone's anger against them, which makes it useful if
you're fighting defensively."

	For consistancy, I'll leave this one the way it's been, which was 
lowercase throughout.

	Though, now that I think of it, the reason for not capitalizing it was 
because I thought it made the story look more comical, which, um, it's 
supposed to be.

	....

	>_<

A young woman with long red hair in a ponytail, wearing a red {bandana : bandanna|
and sleeveless gi strode out from behind the shack, looking around
speculatively.

	By my dictionary, both are correct. O_o

	Is there a difference between the two spellings in terms of meaning?

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