Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Mon, 11 Aug 2003 21:55:23 -0500 "G.L. Sandborn"
<sandborn@kc.rr.com> wrote:
At long last, my most {troublesom : troublesome} chapter is finished.
Please enjoy.
Easy for you to sa.
Pressing herself into the room's corner, she drew her legs
up and tried to hide behind her knees. Sodoshi was frantically
cutting her way through the attacking warriors but their {shear : sheer}
numbers caused her to retreat a few inches at a time. It
wouldn't be long before Nabiki would find herself on the front
line facing the seemingly endless supply of undead horrors with
only her bare hands to defend herself.
Unless you meant it as a cutting remark.
"Hi, {sis : Sis}," Akane chirped as she swatted away a loose samurai
head that flew from a rotting body Ranma had just dismembered.
"I like your outfit. Is it new?"
Sodoshi was fighting well, Ranma and Akane were eliminating
everything in sight, and her husband was {decimating : destroying} what was
left. The room seemed filled with zombie-like henchmen but there
was no sign of the General.
I don't think he's leaving 9/10s of them 'alive'.
Opening it, he stepped into a flood of people all {taking : talking} at
the same time with sirens howling in the background.
Nabiki sighed again. "It's going to be a long trip home."
"Your trip, little one, will be as long as you wish to make
it." Sato stared lovingly at the shrine again. "For me, I'm
already home."
That would be a good ending to the saga or at least this story arc.