Okay, I've read part 14 and 15 now. I printed them off and read them during
night shift at work, so I didn't get to write down all the comments.








I did really like them, both parts. It's interesting to have Nabiki
kidnapped too, for once ^-^ (Nabiki hasn't been kidnapped before, has she?
Well, except for in one of the movies). It makes a very interesting twist.
Also, I like how the relationship between Ranma and Ryoga is developing.
You've worked a long way to get to this point where they could almost be
like brothers, but aren't.

Then again, considering how some siblings act towards each other...^-^

I look forward to moving onto book two.

Oh, and are the chapters below book two linked to this same fic, but just
some time later, or is it a completely different plotline?

--

I have a question not related to your fanfic, but I thought you might know
the answer since you seem very familiar with character techniques. Do you
happen to know what Konatsu's techniques are? I'd appreciate any help that
you could provide.

- Denise


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