Kodachi's magical girl name.

Originally it was Kawaii Keisai, but someone pointed out that was too weird
since Keisai means
'spouse' in addition to 'thorn' but said if I used Kei it would be fine. Kei
just made me think of
the Dirty Pair so I decided to just ditch the Japanese entirely and use
Cutey Thorn. Any suggestions
for a better name would be appreciated, though ^_^

Hmm, how about a more western name like 'The Scarlet Thorn'
The thorns wouldn't be scarlet at first, but considering what
kind of magical girl Kodachi would be they soon will be. :)

I had an odd thought about her outfit.  With all those petals
it would be really hard to draw, so it's ironically something
that probably would never exist in manga and especially manga.
Also might discourage people from trying to do fanart...

And about the intro, you mention Puni Puni Poemi... well, that
intro has very little dialogue and is mostly done with very
quick action sequences.  It gets things over with as quickly
as possible.  I think yours could do the same if you just
reigned back on the adjectives.  The actual dialogue is fine.

Ammadeau 




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