In other words, the life of Katsuragi Misato was going to end
very soon. Besides, as they already knew that she had come to know
"too much", she --- quite "naturally" --- was marked for death: Misato
was going to be adequately cancelled somehow, someday, someway, before
the coming of the great "day of Redemption". Ryoji Kaji had warned her
about the actual _raisons d'�tre_ of the� artificial Angels and of the
whole Human Completion Project, but she hadn't wanted to comprehend
the total meaning of his last message.

Ya know, the one thing I notice more than anything else when I read is the 
mixing of name styles, between the Asian (Family, Personal) and the Western
(Personal, Family).  I think you need to decide how to go here.  Kaji is the 
Family name, Ryouji the Personal.

Dave Fox

"I can't take his money.  I can't print my own money.
I have to work to -get- money.  Why don't I just lie
down and DIE?"
Homer Simpson


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