Haha. that was really fun. I should go down a few lines so I don't spoil
this for anyone...

This is a Ranma � fanfiction, written solely for the fun of it.  I do not

own any of the characters; I just borrowed them from Takahashi Rumiko.

This is a stand alone story about Ranma and Akane's "First Time," told in

a most tasteful manner.  It takes place shortly before the attempted wedding
at the end of the series.

Please, please send my plenty of C&C or anything else, both positive OR

negative!

                                   Practice Makes Perfect
                                                   By Nuki Mouse.

   - Okay, here are my comments again. I figured out about halfway through
that they were actually practising dancing, but that's only because it
seemed odd to me that they were going to go to the dojo to
practise...anything else. ^-^ Well, aside from martial arts, but then Akane
started putting on makeup. I still loved it though, it's a very funny piece.

    I've tried writing fanfiction like this before, where you go one way but
you write it to look like it could go another way. It can be hard to do, and
although you did a good job, it's a good idea to make sure what you want the
reader to think is feasible. It did work out very well here, though.


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