Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Sun, 13 Jul 2003 10:30:47 -0400 DB Sommer <sommer@3rdm.net> wrote:
Akane's eyes bulged in fear as she found herself surrounded on all sides by
lust-filled men. No way could she take that many guys, no matter how horny
she was with abstaining for so long. "Won't someone save me?!" she cried.
Finally back on script.
A thunderous roar filled the air, causing the very ground itself to tremble.
Suddenly the air was filled with flying bodies that were tossed about like
leaves in a tornado. A hundred men were thrown back, left to soar through
the air before crashing hard into the ground. Their bodies filled the entire
length of the school yard, all of them groaning in various states of
senselessness.
Senselessness? I thought that's how all that got started.
"Yes!" Akane cried out in a joyous delirium. "I'm yours! Do with me what you
will!"
Parcheesi anyone?
Abruptly, the mauling stopped. In a high pitched, feminine voice, Kunou
asked, "Ranma, when you chest get so small?"
Lucky for Kuno it's a dream. Unlucky for Shampoo.
I do look forward to seeing more soon.