Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Tue, 01 Jul 2003 05:02:29 -0400 Sean Danna
<carrotglace@mindspring.com> wrote:
Rei and Makoto both screamed. Minako simply jumped, and {Rei : Ami} managed a
quiet gasp. Usagi was hysterical with terror. All of them calmed quickly
as they realized who they were looking at. Nabiki appeared to be
sleeping still.
Rei and Ami might be swapped since Ami and Makoto tend to be together,
but I would expect Rei to be more vocal than Ami.
"Huh?" said the girl as she glanced down at her radar screen. Sure
enough, around eight more targets appeared to be moving towards her fast
from the edge of the screen. "Come on. They aren't even in {rage : range} yet,"
she muttered irritably as she spun around to face them. "I'm going back
towards the surface of the big one."
Somehow, a small prickle of fear started to worm it's way into her
stomach. "Say. What is {mom : Mom} gonna think about all this. I've been gone a
while. I'll bet she's worried sick...she's gonna kill me." The girl
looked up for a moment. "Um, Tendo?"
"{Kikuko : Ikuko}, do you know a Tendo?" he asked her as he put his hand over the
receiver.