When Akane's hair gets cut, Ryoga is basically saying
"so what? her hair didn't get cut." It's only after a few minutes of seeing
that she's in shock that he concedes, and says she can hit him to make
her feel better. What you're writing is definitely an ealier, further
hardened
and trained Ryoga. He IS super-strong, but his ability to get lost is what
balances his strength.
-- Err...to avoid looking like an idiot...I meant "so what? she didn't
get hurt."
Sorry to spam the list with this correction.
*sweatdrop*
-Denise
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