Subject: [FFML] Re: [SM][Fanfic][Repost]Defending Her Majesty
From: Donny Cheng
Date: 6/19/2003, 1:14 AM
To: DB Sommer
CC: ffml@anifics.com




DB Sommer wrote:
Wee. Stuff from Donny:
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Heh, see? Proof I'm not dead :P

This story, while NOT a lemon


Bah! What good are you then if there's no lemon?

I'll leave that to more perv... er, talented minds like yourself.

Endymion paced nervously in the antechamber to their bedroom as
he waited for his wife.  It never ceased to amaze him how long it could
take her to get ready.  He supposed that the girl in her took over on
these special nights where they entertained their subjects,
dignitaries, and ambassadors to the court.


With 'ye Royale Orgy'

or so I can dream.

or write yourself :P

 She could wear something

other than her usual, regal, but ultimately plain, white dress.  *Her
former self would probably have killed herself if she knew that she
would be wearing a single style for the rest of her life,* he thought
wryly.


Usagi: Bah. I set the trends, like Jennifer Anistons' hair used to. It's
good to be the Queen

I imagine that would be an even worse hell than wearing the same style 
for centuries... other's wearing the same style as you throughout those 
centuries ^^;

A glance at the ambassadors in the room increased Endymion�s mood


increased it how?

Ah maybe a rewording.  The lack of Starlights among the ambassadors 
improving his earlier mood of anxiety.

Serenity giggled at Uranus�s husky voice.  �I bet you say that to
everyone.  How do you know I�m cute behind this mask?�


Uranus: Good point. You could be a real dog behind it. We'll leave it on
when we get down with one another.

Heh


�Only that,� Uranus started to say, then bent down to the woman�s
ear to finish her thought, �I think anything underneath would show up.�


Serenity: Ha! You're one to call someone else flat chested.

Uranus: That wasn't what I meant.

Lol... y'know... I think I'm going to steal that bit... ruins the mood, 
but somehow I see that as the more plausible next line :P

�Wouldn�t I?�  Uranus lowered her hands from the small of the
shorter woman�s back.


And found a sword embedded in her back.

"Oops, silly me, it slipped," Endymion said as Uranus slipped lifelessly to
the floor.

Usagi frowned. "Good thing I wore black, the bloodstains won't show up. Now
I won't have to change after ressureecting Haruka.

Hehe.

<snip corrections>  Thanks, will fix them.

Rei blushed at the words as Serenity held her gaze.  She was so
much easier to deal with back when she gave out insults rather than
compliments.  �Then I hope my performance won�t disappoint tonight.�


Rei: I'll do 'The Real Slim Shady' by that poet laurite from the twenty
first century, Esandem

Serenity: Actually, that's Emnem

Rei: Oh, sorry. S+M is what I would like to do with you.

Who'd be the S and who'd be the M in that relationship? :P

have been in their positions.  Theirs was a dangerous game of balance,
the war between her happiness and theirs.  He sought only for her to be
happy and would not jeopardize that for anything in the world.  If she�
accepted them, then he would also, however grudgingly.  Until that time
however, they could just keep their hands to themselves.


Ncie ending thought

Heh, yeah, pretty much sums of the point of the story aside from the pwp 
fanservice scenes ^^;;

Good story. I enjoyed it.

DB Sommer

Thanks for the C & C and glad you liked it.

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