Battle Ohki wrote:

Any and all C+C is appreciated. You can contact me at
sommer@3rdm.net

good fic
would take out the architect bit at the end

Since this was a one shot, I wanted to show what the eventual effects of
what had transpired in this story would be.

and minor editing could make it completely free of Matrix reloaded refs

True, but in a couple of months, everyone that will have wanted to see it
basically will have, and it won't matter. Still, I might put in the spoiler
warning anyway.

will not comment on matrix reloaded stuff you could put in....
(well have you heard of the Animatrix?)

Heard, seen one of the sections, of, and will watch once my friend that owns
it stops by. :)

anyone remember way way back a spamfic with AMG / Matrix??

No, too far back for me. But there have been lots of Matrix/Anime xovers. It
wouldn't surprise me if there was one.

DB Sommer




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