Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Fri, 13 Jun 2003 04:33:24 -0400 Sean Danna <carrotglace@mindspring.com> wrote:
Sorry. My E-mail is acting screwy at the moment. If you can't get
attachments just use this link. It leads to the first chapter, just
select the newest chapter from the little pop up list near the top.
^_^
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=404359
Such URLs are always welcome.
Kunzite frowned. It did make sense, having the senshi of the {moon : Moon}
show up at an inopportune time would be very likely. She'd still die
of course, but it would probably be a bit more than a passing
annoyance. "Very well. How do you propose we do that? Ask them?"
"Capturing one and torturing her should be enough. They are still
just young girls, their loyalties will only be so deep."
Mars is already pre-captured. If she regains consciousness.
"If you tell me what I want to know, I'll probably let you go when
this is over. You're not going anywhere until we've found a way to
clean up the mess you made." The man tried to stand up but the boy
shoved him back onto the ground. "Stay put." The boy was looking
over his shoulder at the city. They were about a mile inside town.
Let him go like Arnold Schwarzenegger did in Commando?
He turned to glare at them both. "Now. Until you can play and make
it sound like that. Don't bother playing it here. Stick to that pop
crap you're used {too : to}. If you continue playing those songs,
eventually, a group of drunken military types will hear it. They'll
probably kill you."
"Dat's {Amazing : amazing}!" cried Spike as he grabbed the man in a rough and
bone crunching hug. "Dat's exactly what happened ta me!"
"Because your only purpose in life is my misery, just like almost
every other living creature on this planet?"
I'm sure most insects and small mammals have other interests.
"His name is Yoshi. He's a scientist for Cybertech {industries : Industries}. I'm
working with him and Carrot on a story!" supplied Mei Lin cheerfully.
She picked up Hibiki's head and lifted it off the bar by the hair.
"This is Hibiki. He's the driver." She promptly dropped his face
back to where it was and he didn't react despite the fact that he was
still awake, even if only slightly.
"Wow, how archaic and cool sounding," said Carrot with an unimpressed
looking frown. Having a blade like the one he wore on his back made
him feel much more secure for some reason. He glanced back at the
hilt over his shoulder and back at the {Shinobi : shinobi}. "Let's
say I believe you. I don't like things that play with my mind."
Kei's cursed knife came to mind immediately.
"You're right. I don't trust you," replied the boy calmly as he
backed away from the {Shinobi : shinobi} a little. He hadn't
realized just how close they had become while they were talking.
Neither one had gotten within a sword slash's length of the other,
but they were coming close.
"Would you like me to show you what a scorpion can do to a spider{: ,}
Spiderman?"
The scorpion woman screamed in rage as she spun around and threw him
into the side of a dumpster. The metal buckled under the impact and
he slumped to the ground. Slowly he pushed himself {too : to} his feet and
growled as he picked up the sword from the ground again.
"Usagi Tsukino, that thing that's attached itself {too : to} her, and how it
relates to the thing that killed more than two hundred people here."
Makoto's mouth just dropped open. "You're the one..." She fell to
her knees and hung her head. "But...{wha : why}?"
Aman simply sighed and picked up a novel that was on the table where
Rei was still sleeping. He leaned against the wood and started
reading. After a moment he put it down. "If all I'm going to be
doing is sitting here, why do I have such a bad feeling about this
job?" He glanced over at the slumbering senshi and frowned. "I'll
bet you're nothing but trouble."
Still not very bright. There's a reason Carrot asked for protectors
to be assigned to the senshi and a non-alert guardian is no help at
all.