Genma was disgusted with his son; he worked and slaved so the boy 
could be

Cho: And a semicolon instead of a colon there.

And a larger font for the reviewer. I see a semicolon.

"No need, your wife was more than willing to set up an account for 
Ranma.
Right now he has more than enough money in a bank to last him for the 
next
seven years."

Cho: Something tells me that telling him that isn't the smartest move.

Harry: Really. Something very Dursley-esque about him in that regard.

of course, as it later turns out, it's an account at Gringotts, which 
raises the question of how exactly Nodoka was able to

#9;The next few weeks flew by as Ranma spent time with his mother, 
Nodoka

[Harry and Cho blink at the above sentence]

Harry: I'm not sure if I want to know what that '#9:' is doing there.

Cho: Feeling lost in a sea of #2?

the obvious answer; it's a tab. and, once again, that's a semicolon not 
a colon.

"Konnichiwa"

"Konnichiwa"

"Konnichiwa"

"Nihao"

"Hello, youngins."

[Harry and Cho both snicker]

Harry: Okay, I'll admit, THAT was funny.

yeah

The kids look at each other, Ryouga just shrugged his shoulders. "Big 
deal

who is the Harry Potter kid."

Harry: I could kiss that boy.

Cho: ....EWWW!

Harry: Hey! That wasn't--! I'm not--!

Cho: I think I need to keep a closer eye on you, Mr. Potter.

heh

"How exciting, now I can try out my new spell that I was working on."

Getting >out her wand she waved it and pointed it at Ranma.  
"Linguioso!"
Then she >pointed it at Ryouga, "Linguioso!" Putting her wand away.  
"Hi, my
name is >Hermione Granger."

Cho: You have to wonder why it took so long for someone to do that.

Harry: My guess is the writer fancies Hermione and wanted to make sure 
she
got a chance to show off.

or simply none of the others thought of it

Draco sneered at Harry, and then his attention turned to the two

foreigners.  >"Look guys, we have real yellow people.  Straight from
wherever they came >from.  They probably don�t know we�re even talking 
about
them.  What a bunch >of stup.."

Cho: *HISS*

Harry: *ducks for cover*

I'd been wondering how she was gonna react to that

Draco looked down at Khu-Lon, he knew better than to say anything in 
front

of a teacher.  "No, no problems at all."  Giving her a huge smile,
whispering to Ranma.  "Your lucky.  Come on lets get out of here.  I 
feel
dirty for some reason."

Harry: *mutters something about Snape, hoovers, and greasy hair*

Cho: HARRY!

Harry: Just stating a fact.

what's this, now? i don't get it

Harry waved and bye just barely came out of his voice.  It was so soft

that >nobody in the compartment heard him.  His face was flushed, he 
didn�t
know >what he was feeling, but he really liked Xian-Pu.  Hopefully he 
would
see her >again.

Harry: WHY do you keep glaring at me like that, Cho?

Offscreen voice: I'll give you a hint. It has to do with eating 
Chinese.

[Offscreen voice is not heard from again, as Cho whips out her wand and
casts several particularly nasty hexes at the speaker.]

ouch. quite well-deserved punishment for a very lame joke, though

Cho needs to keep in mind that at this point in time Harry's not met her

"Ol yer firs years come over her.  Leave yer bag on tha train.  Everin

else, yous know where to go."  He patiently waited till all the first 
year
students were

Harry: Hagrid must be incredibly drunk to be slurring his speech THAT 
badly.

Cho: That, or the writer just doesn't know how to write Hagrid 
properly.

Chapter 5 � The Sorting

(Incomplete)

Harry: That's it, then?

Cho: Looks like.

[Cho and Harry suddenly vanish from the cinema, leaving the author's 
notes
rolling on the screen in a vacant room.]

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