AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! You... you did
it! 

YOU DID IT! YOU ACTUALLY MANAGED TO...  

::breathes:: 

sigh... I'm okay now, I'm okay... still... I have to
admit I had many doubts at whether you'd be able to
pull this off. Specially since it took you this much
to creap out of your own well. Fanfic-wise, at least.
^_~

"And then, just when she thought she was safe..."

Tomo narrated in a

dramatic voice before a terrified Chiyo, "she looked

back at her

apartment... and saw her daughter come out!"

"B-but I thought they were both in the elevator!"

"Ah, so did she!" Tomo loomed over her, "But then she

looked back at

the little girl with her... and it was the ghost of

the missing girl!"

Hmm... this brings back memories...

The scene: Tama-house, staring at a tv where a
japanese woman in her late 30's is climbing a ladder
next to the water tank. WD, along with Shaloom are
seated closer to the TV with Jorge and Tama just
behind them.

WD & Shaloom: Yes! Up the ladder open it up!

Jorge: It'll end with that! Open it up!

Tama: A!

Suddenly, in less than a second something from inside
the water tank hits it five times, leaving 10-old-girl
fist sized marks on the outside.

Everyone: YIKES! NO DON'T OPEN IT! RUN!

Kaorin looked down at Yomi's hand, spreading out the

fingers into a number. "She'll show you," she >said.
"Four days."

Tomo pulled Yomi's hand off her mouth. "Actually,
she watched it two days ago. I did it yesterday."

Kaorin blinked. "Ah. Um..." She spread Yomi's hand
open again. "Five days?"

LOL!

"Well, what do you say to that!" Tomo pointed at the
ball pit. Almost on cue, a little girl in white and
with long hair covering her face pulled herself out
of the pit. Yomi and Tomo stared in shock. Then the
girl brushed her hair back and happily went off to
her mother. The two girls went slack in relief.

That's it. No more cookies for you while watching
Gundam 0083.

A little fuse blew out inside Tomo's head and she
fell over.

heh, very, very Tomo-like.

At that, Osaka's smiled faltered and she >bowed.

"Aaa... I'm sorry, Sakaki-chan, but Sadako->san got to
them before me..." She looked down at a >black VHS
that had suddenly appeared in her >hands. "It needs a
lot more work before it's >ready..."

"Wh-what? Why do you have that?" Sakaki stared at the

VHS,

frowning.

"A! But I'm almost done with everyone!" Osaka smiled
happily.
"Thank you for adding Chiyo-chan, Sakaki-chan!"

What worries me the most... is that THAT was almost
scary... damn!

No... Kasuga-san..." Sakaki thought. "We have to
stop you."

Hmm... I have a glimmer of an idea of what might
happen... :p

Anyway, Jorge, it's good to see you back in the ranks
of us Fanfic writers. I had almost given up hope of
ever seeing another of your works! �_� not that you
having a job actually had to do anything with it...
no...

Still, very... cute fic. :) Story's interesting, nice
work on characters, mayorly creepy at times with
Osaka... and I'll be waiting to hear from you and
Azuringu Dai-O!

-D 

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