Woohoo! Something I don't get to do very often is C&C.  Not certain why I picked this fic to read today but I was bored at work :)

Donny Cheng <donnyc@osb.att.ne.jp> wrote:

Disclaimer: All characters portrayed in this story are the property of
Naoko Takeuchi and co.

This story, while NOT a lemon and NO real crass words are used, is
gratuitous. You have been warned.

So its a lime?

C & C welcomed.

Defending Her Majesty

A sequel to For Want of Moon

by

Donny Cheng

Endymion paced nervously in the antechamber to their bedroom as
he waited for his wife. It never ceased to amaze him how long it could
take her to get ready. He supposed that the girl in her took over on
these special nights where they entertained their subjects,
dignitaries, and ambassadors to the court. She could wear something
other than her usual, regal, but ultimately plain, white dress. *Her
former self would probably have killed herself if she knew that she
would be wearing a single style for the rest of her life,* he thought
wryly.

He supposed that the girl in him took ...  Went from one view to third person. 

Stop moving around, youre making me nervous now, Serenity
chided as the maids opened to doors for her. She almost giggled as
Endymions jaw dropped at her appearance. I take it that this is to
his Majestys liking?

Hehe, I liked this one.

Endymion nodded numbly as he hesitantly held out his arm for his
wife. You look amazing. And she did. Her dress was similar to her
queenly outfit in that it was strapless with the same lacing along the
top with a cute bow at her back. However, this gown was midnight
black, and the instead of a voluminous skirt, the hem was cut short,
way too short, above her knees, in the fashion of a mini-skirt. He
could imagine how even more impressive she would look with her pale,
flawless skin enhanced against the dress and darkness of the night sky.
What was more, she hand undone her hair, letting it out so that it
looked much like Minakos.

Really? Serenity asked as she twirled around in her new dress,
before linking her arm with her husbands. She stood on her toes to
nuzzle at his ears, whispering, Mmm... for that. you will get a
special treat tonight. Im not wearing any....

Woohoo!  Um *cough* I ment to say *cough* um yea keep it.

The shock had just worn off before the caressing lips of his
queen made him stiffen up again. Stop that or well never leave this
room.

Maybe The shock had almost worn off before ....  Makes it seem like she is moving to take advantage of her shocked hubby.

Is that a promise or a threat? She asked impishly with a
twinkle in her eye.

You do realize that were not alone right?

"Aw but I like it when the maids watch"

Serenity had the decency to blush as she remembered her maids
were still in the room. They were looking at their feet as long
suffering employees accustomed to their employers carelessness were
wont to do. Okay, lets go. Loosen up, Endy-chan. Were going to a
masquerade, not a battle. Nobody will know who we are so we can mingle
freely.


Endymion grimaced. A battle was indeed what he was going to be
going into tonight.

Yea tax time can be a real pain in the .... well you know...

* * * * *

I heard about that old coot Miriam putting you on a diet for
gaining weight during your last holiday. So I thought you could use a

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ARGH!   Its cut off at the last minute!  Its like watching an old TV show when they put "TO BE CONTINUED" right at a good spot.  Although I could go without the whole diet thing.

All in all not a bad read.  Sorry I didn't have time to C&C everything but thats the stuff that caught me off gaurd.

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