On Mon, 26 May 2003, DB Sommer wrote:

Ha! Still one more CotS fic to do:

Unfortunately just one. It seems that pointy ears and space battles are no
match for pigtails and pointless Tomo-Yomi arguments. :-)

regretting it. The walls of the room swam around me, and I
saw dozens of amorphous, ghostly shapes with my spatial
sense.

Hmm Lafiel perhaps after the spatial reference.

Ha! Finally someone who gets it!

Some minutes later the spots and shapes had subsided enough and I
stumbled out of bed. Whatever had caused this didn't seem to
go away. I had to get help, and there was only on person on this
planet who I could trust enough. But before I could contact Jinto, I
glanced at the closet's mirrored door and recieved another shock: the
skin on my face was bright red.

What? Abh don't blush? :)

Abriels probably don't. At least they won't let you see it. :-)

If I were

was

I'm quite certain you can say "If I were..."
Then again, I'm not native speaker and it's been five years since I last
studied English...

Still, the sight of admiral Spoor gaping in open-mouthed surprise
was amusing. I even let a bit of a smile to show on my face when she
dropped her sword.

"You... Your skin?"

Hmm. Wonder if she's jealous and would go for a darker complexion as well.
:)

Probably just annoyed that Lafiel got to shock her once. It just isn't
proper, an Abriel coming and shocking a Spoor. :-)

Short, but amusing.

My thanks.

- Jussi Nikander

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