"I... wouldn't know."

 "Wow, Yomi-san... you really like spicy stuff!"

 "Ha!  It's not that spicy!  I could pour three shakes onto my

croquette

and I wouldn't sweat!"

 "Oh, really?  Try four shakes."

 "Five shakes!"

Hmm. Might want to make some detail for it  to be clear who the

others

goading her on are.

That's the trouble with restricting yourself to a hundred words:

there's a

lot that can't be sufficiently explained.  Essentially, this is Yomi

and

Tomo fighting it out; Yomi likes it spicy, and Tomo won't back down

from a

challenge, even a self-inflicted one.

I think what I'll need to do is rewrite this thing with Yomi narrating

it

or
some such.

	I'd certainly have no problems with putting an expanded version
in place of the current one. As it turned out, you were the only one up
to the challenge of a 100-word story. Congratulations on that, by the
way. You can tell a truly gifted writer when they can apply that kind of
discipline to their work.

     Ja mata,
     Larry F

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