Opps sorry Don, got correct my katakana.... I asked the
little woman and she says "o-raito" is correct.

Like I said... a hard science to master.

J


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Thanks for the help, Jourdan. I'll fix it.
 
Don.

A fun chapter... got a few corrections for you

though..

"Oi! Fune ga namae wa Karipso desu ka?"

That should be "Oi!  Kono fune no namae ha

Karipuso

desuka?"   Yes I know that particle "ha" is

pronounced as

"wa" but it isn't correct to write it as "wa." 

Adding

"kono" (this) to the sentence makes it a little

more

natural...

"Aaraitu!" the girl exclaimed in Japanglish.

That would be "Ara-ito!"  Figuring out katana is a
bitch... mostly a practice and seen enough of it

thing...

All in all... a nice setup chapter.  I look

forward to the

next and the following series.

J

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