Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Fri, 09 May 2003 21:45:03 -0500 Donald Lee Granberry
<noharness@mac.com> wrote:
Here it is at long last. My humblest apologies for the inordinately long
hiatus.
Don't forget to tell people where to find the back chapters. Is
http://www.iamnota.net/fanfics/ctcd/ still the preferred site?
"The chief {jailor : jailer} and our smiths found themselves in a great deal of
trouble over it, so we conducted some tests."
"Oh, don't worry. You are the only one who will need faith. I have a
lifetime of practice behind me."
Clever of Kiima to find a way to get in good with Akane.
"Yes, {child : Child}, just like his song."
Kiima calling Akane 'Child' doesn't sound quite right to me. She's
not as stuffy as Haabu and she has strong reasons to want Akane to
like her.
"Good thinking, Akane-{chan : san}," Kiima said.
Kiima's been using 'san' up to now. I'm actually a little surprised
she didn't start the day with 'sama' or 'dono'.
"I should have had a little more faith in you, Tendou-{san : chan}," Kiima
said as she recovered her breath and pulled the release that tied Akane's
harness to her own. "I planned to do a beginner's landing."
She's used 'chan' several times now. I can see where she might get
more formal again when they are around others, but they are still
alone.