From: Aaron E Nowack <anowack@juno.com>

        When six years had passed, Tokyo-4 boasted over a thousand and a
half people, in addition to perhaps a third of that number living in
smaller settlements on its outskirts.  The scouts occasionally traded

A thousand and a half? I think you mean fifteen-hundred, though I suppose 
that you really could have half a person...

Other than that, nothing else really stood out as worth pointing out in this 
or chapter 1. I personally like using this writing style, though I'm sure I 
botch it up quite a bit more than you.



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