Subject: [FFML] My Own OMG Lemon 4 Repost. Ignore previous unedited post
From: "marcussturm" <marcussturm@prodigy.net>
Date: 4/22/2003, 7:33 PM
To: "FFML" <ffml@anifics.com>

Here's the next chapter of my story.  While not wholly satisfied with it, it has the plot elements I want to explore laid out.  Also, there's no sex in this portion, so it could be considered lime for suggestions of sex.

Disclaimer: 

The following story is not for minors, or for use where adult reading matter is prohibited.

This story contains very adult content, and if it was posted to ASSM would be labeled as; mc, nc, inc, rape, impreg, so if you don't like your anime characters treated roughly, just delete this now as I am making them act extremely OOC, and do things that are sick and depraved.

I'm basing the characters on the movies and manga, so don't be surprised on who will show up in them. 

I don't own any of the characters in the following story, I'm just playing with them for awhile, and don't expect to make anything off them, so would their creator not sue me please?

Chapter 4

I'ts been five weeks sinse the old abandoned temple was reoccupied, and people passing by could be forgiven for thinking that its serene exterior extended to the interior of the buildings.

In fact, the inside of the main compound looked as if a schitzophrinic had decorated it, with the living and dining rooms, as well as the kitchen, showing such signs of domestic tranquility, that you would get warm and fuzzy feelings just by entering them.

By contrast, the three bedrooms were decorated in such a way as to make a bordello seem the height of elegance and taste, with the two smaller ones seeming to be used only to store clothing, or maybe have a quick bout of snuggling on the queen-sized beds.

The master bedroom, in contrast, had a bed large enough to hold a half dozen people with space to spare, or ten in comfort if they were VERY friendly, with traces of dainty undergarments seemingly overlooked in a dark corner, of glimpsed partially hidden under a pile of pillows on the floor.

The bathing area seemed to be traditionally Japanese at first glance, with an area to disrobe, then a place to wash in cold water.  However, where one would normally find a furo, what actually was encountred was an expanse of heated water the size of an Olympic pool, with ferny grottoes, couches and divans that tempt a couple or threesome to indulge in a bit of foreplay, as well as a suprisingly tasteful display of erotic statuary that, on the whole, put the most decadant Roman spa to shame.

Finally, there was an outbuilding containing what could only be described as a mechanics shop, with parts of various vehicles and tools racked and stacked.

These differences in decor was explained by the the fact that two different people, Goddessess actually, decorated the living quarters.

The younger one, Belldandy, was the homemaker, making comfort for those living there her goal.

The older, her sister Urd, was a self-styled Goddess of Love, and she brought to the home all she felt that she and her lovers needed to be inspired.

That one of those lovers was her sister was something she had come to savor, as an unlooked-for bonus to her life as it was now.  Her other lover, however, was a mortal  that, at first, she had ridiculed and not taken seriously.

That was a mistake, as said mortal had been the recipient of a wish from Belldandy, where, in a bout of drunken self-pity, he'd wished to have the power to make ANY female his totaly obediant, loyal lover.

Not knowing that, she made him mad, so he had her join he and her sister in a threesome, where the two girls found that they couldn't quite bring themselves to regret it.

Their mortal lover, one Keichii Morisito, was an engineering student at Nekomi Tech, where he'd been staying in dorms until his wish.  Not being able to explain why he'd suddenly aquired two lovers, they'd found the abandoned temple, and between the magic of two Goddesses, and the physical strength and mechanical abilities of one mortal man, they transformed the place into something they were becoming to feel of as a Home.

One of the females, Belldandy, was in the kitchen, where she was putting away groceries prior to taking a bath, a habit they had all gotten into after a day of school for Keichii and her, and a day of both potion and mischief making for Urd.

Thinking back, she's amazed at what happened to bring them to their present acceptance of their life.  

The morning after they had moved to their new home, Keichii woke up in unfamilliar surroundings, with a naked female on either side of him in the bed.  Jumping out of bed in a panic, he started babbling apologies to them when his actions woke them up, saying that he didn't know how he could have done that to them, and telling how he would immediatley let them go back to Heaven where they belonged.

On being told that it was impossible to revoke his wish, as he'd put in no stipulations about releasing a lover once he'd gotten one, he determined to leave them strictly alone, and did his best to forget what the three of them had done with each other.

This was easier said than because, while he was now returned to almost normal, the sisters were now constrained to be his lovers, and started seeking him out to flirt, display themselves to him, and tempt him to bed them.

When he  told them to leave him alone, they told him that they couldn't, because of his wish.

This only made him more determined to resist their charms.  His resistance pushed the girls to almost frantic efforts to seduce him, doing stripteases to arouse him, and when that didn't work, putting on a lesbian act for his benifit.

On seeing how the Goddesses were acting, and how stressed his refusal to make love to them was making them, Keichii determined that the only way to free them was to not be there to be bound to.  

Luckily, Urd discovered his plan to commit suicide, and with Belldandy, managed to convince him that what they felt for him wasn't because he commanded them.

Belldandy revealed how she had already had feelings for him, even going so far as to make a wish of her own that bound her to him before she gave him his.

As for Urd, while not starting out liking him, as time went on, she began to see what Belldandy had seen about him years ago, and how he was a perfect match for her sister.  Also, his efforts to free them from his control, plus this last try, had mellowed her out enough towards him that she told him that she would like to see if they could work it out together.

Amazingly enough, it seemed to be working, with a few hiccoughs now and then.

Keichii was reassured that they did have real feelings for him, and there was no mistaking his for them, but he had developed a few mental quirks along the way to their present stability.

Knowing himself the lover of the two now willing Goddesses, Keichi had no doubts as to his masculinity, which gave him the confidence to stand up to his Sempai in the Race Club.  He refuses to let them take advantage of him to do all the work, enlisting the the help of the other members in the club, as well as shooting down some of their more idiotic stunts.

This earned him the grudging respect of his Sempai, as well as popularity with the rest of the club, as it made each win more of a group effort.

This was a two-sided blessing, though, as, at times, he sometimes had difficulty in accepting that he deserved what he had, feeling that he hadn't earned it for himself, but because of his two Goddess lovers.

At such times, he was prone to bouts of angst, as well as an uncertain temper.  The sisters had learned to handle it though, reassuring him with their unfeigned affection.

Right now, she and Urd were worried because a new problem with an old source had cropped up.  Before she could think any more about it though, Urd came into the kitchen and asked, "How are things with Keichii?"

"Not too good," replied Belldandy, "That girl Sayoko Mishima is still pestering him, and the more Keichii tries to avoid her, the harder she tries to attract him.  I just don't understand her, she publicly denounced him just a while ago, so why is she trying to attract him now?"

"I can tell you that.  I did a little investigating on her, and found out some things that would explain why she's doing what he is."

Looking concernedly at her sister, Belldandy asked, "You didn't hack into her files did you, you know what happened the last time you did that?"

Shuddering slightly at the remberance of how she had to clean the Valkyries barracks with a toothbrush and flywhisk for a month, Urd replied, "No, nothing like that, I just asked around school about her old boyfriends.  It seems that she's the possessive type.  Even if she breaks up with someone, if she sees them getting together with someone else, she does her best to break the new couple up.  Seeing Keichii escorting the two of us around must have really steamed her.

"Also, I found out that she was considered the most popular girl on campus, but when you started going to class with Keichii, you took some of her following.  From the gossip I've heard, she's trying to break you two up and drive you away, then, when you've separated, she'll reject him again."

Hearing this saddend Belldandy, as she feels that anyone who could be so petty and spiteful couldn't be very happy with herself.

She asks Urd, "Do you think we should tell Keichii about this?"

"I don't know," she replied, "with the way she's been hounding him, there's no telling how he'd react.  By the way, where is he?"

"He helped me bring in the groceries, then I sent him to get cleaned up.  A nice warm bath was sure to relax him, and I told him I'd be with him as soon as I had put them away."

"Well," said Urd, "I think I'll join you two, a nice relaxing bath sounds like just what I need."

So saying, as soon as Belldandy was finished, the two sisters went to the bathing room.  There, they stripped, then took turns washing each others backs, with a little grabb ass added in.  They controlled themselves, however, and started towards the pool, where they could see Keichii laying back against the side in the shallow end, looking more relaxed than they had seen him in a while.

Before reaching it, however, a light suddenly shined out of the pool, and a vortex formed right of their dozing lover.

Immediatly realizing what was about to happen, they both called out, "Keichii, wake up!"

Being suddenly woken from a peaceful doze, it took Keichii a moment to notice that a young girl, dressed in a short skirt with what looked like an elaborate lab coat over it, as well as what looked like a croquet mallet on her back, was rising from the water in front of him.

Instantly knowing what she was, if not who, he could only cover his face in woe.  Because of that, he didn't see her look around at the sound of the shout, see the two naked Goddesses, then look down to see the equally naked boy below her.  

What he did notice, however, was a voice yelling, "Pervert!", as well as Belldandy yelling, "Skuld, no!", before a sharp pain to his head sent him slipping into unconciousness.
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There you have it, my next part of the story.  The next chapter will be fron Skulds POV, and it won't be pretty.


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