Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Fri, 11 Apr 2003 02:47:05 -0400 Carrot Glace
<Carrotglace@mindspring.com> wrote:
"Your mother would scold you for using such language."
"Oh no," she muttered quietly as she turned.
Now she's in for it.
Ami screamed in terror as something grabbed her wrist in the shadows.
She never saw what it was that grabbed her and pinned her {armed : arm} to the
wall. She hung there suspended by one hand with her feet dangling
inches above the ground. Her communicator clattered across the ground
noisily. "No! Get away from me!"
She leaned against the wall, hoping to find some stability to keep
herself standing. She took three steps and collapsed into a swinging
doorway onto the ground. It slammed back into her ankle and she almost
screamed again in pain. She pulled herself along the floor and grabbed
something thin and cool as she crawled further into the darkness. It
clattered to the ground noisily and she heard the sound of small metal
objects clattering across the ground. A large metal pan filled with
water impacted on her back, but it didn't hurt much.
If both hands are useless, how could she grab something. She
might *try* to grab something. Another possiblity is that the problem
with both hands mentioned just after she used Shabon Spray was only
temporary.
She closed her eyes and tensed her body as she gripped the spike as
hard as she could. She knew that what she was about to do would really
{suck : hurt}.
Her situation sucks.
Jupiter was looking off into the distance at the huge smoking area near
the bay. "What the hell was that?"
Rei stopped long enough to grab her arm and push the distracted Minako
forward. "Worry about it later! Ami needs us!"
That is a good question. Which duty is stronger? Helping Ami or
helping Usagi?
Ami's mother looked over at her daughter with a weak looking smile.
"So...these are your friends?"
The girl merely smiled and closed her eyes. She actually felt relieved
by the darkness for once.
It will be interesting to see if Dr Mizuno is more sympathetic about
Ami going out with the Senshi now that's she's met one of the
creatures they fight.
Neither one seemed related, but Ami Mizuno knew better. She had seen
something like the {rouge : rogue} monster that fought Spiderman and the Goblin.
It killed two hundred people in the hospital. They still hadn't
identified most of the remains yet.
"My ribs are broken, she'll kill me," muttered the boy. All and all,
not too bad of a way to go.
There are worse ways and he's come close to experiencing many of them.
Hakage merely kicked him in the stomach. "You are all that remains of
the one who sent my friends and family to their death." The shinobi {leg : let}
go of the man's face and snapped his hand around his neck before he fell
away.
I liked that scene. I figured as soon as Hakage grabbed the younger
Hisami near the window that he'd let him go. <G>
Very interesting that the clan owes service to whoever has the sword.
"I know you can contain this mess Yoshida. See {too : to} it."
"Kei may return here. See {too : to} it she isn't harmed. I'll deal with her
myself if need be."