--- Bill Heineman <burger@contrabandent.com> wrote:

Ryoga for Dinner

It's been done often enough that I saw this coming the
moment I saw the title.  Not that this is a bad form of
it, just that it's been done so many times.  (Though the
lemon versions still tend to add a bit of spice, if only
for the challenges of doing it while the meat is cooking
without triggering the change.  These are usually Akane
getting surprise revenge, though I do recall Kasumi
doing the deeds in one.)

Ranma seems a bit OOC, though: getting out of his
promise to Ryoga this way would seem to violate his
sense of honor.

Notes and ideas for Cannibal 1/2 deleted because I don't want to read
anything like it, ever. I mean, yecch.

I will say that I kept expecting a reverse-twist ending, where Ryoga
wanders in after everyone else has left, exchanges a freindly or at least
neutral greeting with Ranma, and then joins them in the celebration
dinner... It would have to be a case where he'd been cured, somehow,
whether it worked for Ranma also or not... given the rest of the setup, I'd
say probably not, meaning that it wouldn't be a Nannichuan/varient thereof,
but rather something somehow specif8ically relevant to a pig curse.


- CD

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