On Sat, 15 Mar 2003, Dfox22@aol.com wrote:

Again with the C&C...

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Madoka, the Wise One of Cold Feet Hold, a stronghold of the
Animeigo tribe of the Aiel, looked down from the balcony and sighed. Her
sister-daughter, Shampoo, was playing 'Whack the Stone Dog' with Naru,
Mutsumi, and Motoko, using poor Keitaro as their victim again. How can he
be so patient with them, she asked herself. Not that patience is a bad
quality in a man, but putting up with this more than once was overdoing
it. Mutsumi wasn't too bad, as she was very gentle, but Shampoo, Naru,
and Motoko didn't seem to be holding back at all.

Yin:  Madoka as the leader of _these_ ladies is a good choice.
Yang:  True.  And yet again, another 'real world' ref, which is cute.
Yin:  And just like Ranma is a ladies man no matter where he is, Keitaro is
still one unlucky bastard...

It's in his nature :)

Only Shampoo's iron-clad will kept her from screaming. That and
the fact that the last time she screamed, Madoka had used her patented
triple-slap on her. It was some sort of channeling trick, Shampoo was
certain. "Shampoo not want to become Wise One."

Yin:  Shampoo the Wise One... isn't that an oxymoron?

Yes.

"Professor H. M. Wogglebug is mixing up a batch of his food
pills," Wasyuu said. "Hopefully, these won't turn people into food this
time."

Yin:  Don't tell me, let me guess: Wogglebug grew up eating plenty
of Solent Green.

He's just trying to make meals convenient to eat when you're busy!

Tylor went.

"How much do we owe?" Yamamoto asked.

"He just asked me to go away," Tylor said, shrugging. He turned
to Nanami. "Ready to sell those peppers?"

She nodded. "Let's go!"

Yin:  (Rolling on the floor, laughing)
Yang:  (In his chair, trying to catch his breath)  This... is the... funniest
part yet.

I quite enjoyed it.

Yang:  What is it about Ranma's breasts that make any woman she
meets poke them?  And on a side note: can I poke them?

Ranma-chan:  No.

Yin:  A very good story, nicely written, with lots of intriguing questions
and subplots.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Yang:  Neither can I.  I want to find out what happens to Basara, and to see
more of the
Tinkers.  Great chapter.

Thank you.



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