Let's see what Fido has to offer:

What if...?


Sylia stood at the window of the control
room and watched as her creations went through
their combat drills.

'Creations'. The first tip that something is off.

*They are much more effective than the agents I
had chosen,* she thought, *I just wish that they
didn't look like....*

Characters from El Hazard. Of course, Sylia's own change in hair style and
bustier figure were for the better, in her opinion. But Priss just looked...
stoned, most of the time.

"Sylia!"

The shouting of her brother had interrupted

can drop 'had'

her train of thought. She turned to the door,
just in time to see Mackie come rushing in.

"There's a rampaging boomer at the shopping
mall!" he said, "The ADolice

AD Police

have already

lost two squads trying to stop it

And that was just on the way over. They haven't actually gotten there yet.
God knows how high the body count will rise when they actually try fighting
the thing.

 and it

doesn't look like they are going to succeed
any time soon!"

"Then we have no choice," Sylia calmly
replied. "Ready the Hardsuits."

"Right."

As Mackie left to make preparations, the
Knight Saber's

Sabers' (I think)

 leader turned back to the window

and pushed the intercom button.

"Okay ladies,"

Okay, ladies,

The voices of her team suddenly called out
in unison. Three figures floated in front
of the machine, each the size of a small child
and dressed in a miniature version of Sylia's
own suit. The only difference was that the
suits each had a different color scheme of
Blue, Green and Pink.

"SURRENDER NOW!" The three shouted,"OR FACE THE
WRATH OF THE SABER PUFF GIRLS!"

Ack! Should have known.

All was silent for a few second then small sounds
of laughter began to come from the places the police
had taken cover.As they got louder, Sylia put her
hand over her visor and shook her head then
muttered:

"I should have gone with the agents."

Probably.

Cute. I enjoyed it. It does strike quite the mental image.

DB Sommer



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