Just a quick note to say I've read this--and wished I hadn't, yet.  Were this a novel, it would be one of those more than capable of keeping me up /way/ past my bedtime.  "Dark and disturbing" doesn't even begin to cover it, but that's some damned fine storytelling.  I just wish I'd had the willpower to wait for the last chapter, so I could have read them both together.

On a technical note, I noticed a number of typos and grammar errors, but, after that emotional rollercoaster, I don't think I can go back through this with an eye for that sort of detail, at least not just yet.

Defender of the Light
Elite Mage
junior member of the Inner Circle of the Mages Council

Contrary to popular opinion, magic and science do mix.

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