Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Tue, 04 Mar 2003 18:10:28 -0800 Christopher Olsen
<christopherolsen28@hotmail.com> wrote:
The little girl stood up slightly unsteadily, putting her katana on the
{ground : floor} and holding up her kimono with one hand. "That's alright dear."
She reached up and patted her daughter on the head, although she had to
stand on her toes to do so. "You had to help your friends." Nodoka
looked at her daughter in concern. "Did you find Kasumi alright?"
Ukyo sighed. "I'm never going to get used to having Genma as a
father-in-law� but I suppose Ill just have to take the bad with the good."
Akane giggled. "But which is which?" She sobered up a moment later, unable
to sustain her laughter.
Shampoo also examined the gashes in the ground, looking a bit worried. "I
don't know what {Ill : I'll} be able to do to help against such powerful
demon. We need great{ : -}grandmother... or Senshi."
Akane should be more sympathetic to Ukyo since she's in the same fix.
Maybe that's why she sobered up.
Shampoo got into a high {martial :: martial arts} stance, balancing on the ball of her right
foot, the other foot perched on top of her right knee. Her hands were high
as well, one over behind her head, the other stretched out in front of her
as if she was beckoning to Johnathon. A moment later she did exactly that,
making a "come and get it" gesture that they were all used too. Johnathon
didn't move an inch for several long moments, then burst into a run, somehow
sensing a weakness in her stance.
Johnathon glanced at her, a bit wild eyed from the experience himself. "We
were... sparring." He stammered uncertainly. "Shampoo just... er...
she just managed to pin me... that's all." Rei {esitated : hesitated}, glancing
questioningly from the rip in Shampoo's dress to Johnathon's torn shirt, and
Johnathon held up his hand, popping the claws out automatically. "I was
going to show Shampoo how to use her claws... it was an accident."
Nabiki laughed. "I'd say so, {big sister : Big Sister}, although it is fun!" She leaned
over the bed, taking hold of Misty's upper shoulder. "Why don't you
climb up in bed with us so we can give you a proper petting? I always wanted
a pet...." She blushed bright red. "Not that you're a pet, Misty... sister."
As the news reporter began a segment on the recent series of monster cat
sightings, Misty's three sisters continued to pet her unconsciously,
letting their fingers go where they willed without really thinking about it.
As the news program went into more detail about the {days : day's} events,
Misty started to grow a bit {discontent : discontented} with the quality of her sisters'
petting... not that she would ever complain, but when they weren't
concentrating on the matter, they tended to simply stroked the parts of her
body that weren't covered by her clothing, concentrating on the fur
they could reach instead. After several minutes of growing frustration,
Misty slowly reached down and started pulling up her halter top, trying
not to get in the way of her sister's hands while she did so.
Nabiki also glanced down, raised an eyebrow, then went back to petting. It
was nicer, {anyways : anyway}, having that long expanse of luxurious black fur
to run her hands though. It was very soothing, really, and Nabiki didn't
blame her sister a bit for wanting to get a little more pleasure out of the
experience. Not that she'd let her own guard down that far... probably...
but she certainly could understand wanting to.
"What was I...?" She murmured quietly to herself, trying desperately to
ignore the fire now raging inside her. "How could I?"
The thing I find slightly odd isn't Misty's actions, but that her
sisters took so long to notice.
Jupiter pulled her arm free with a grunt. "Er, {doctor : Doctor}, Shampoo is down here.
I'm Sailor Jupiter."
Sailor Venus jumped between Akane and Shampoo, putting her hands over
Akane's fists. "It's not what you think!" She insisted. "Nothing
happened! I mean something almost happened but they stopped!"
Shampoo glanced down at her torn dress again and blinked. "No! Shampoo... I
didn't mean that Johnathon did this...." She frowned slightly. "Well he did
do this... but when we were fighting, not when we were... when I...." She
held up a hand. "Wait... this is hard to explain."
"Your not helping." :})