I'm enjoying this story, despite the rather blatant continuity holes being
created left and right in the two source series, but I do have to point out
one thing:

In an earlier chapter, you correctly used the original attack names; in this
chapter, you switched to the godawful DIC dub attack names. Pick one or the
other, not both, alright?

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