A couple of comments on an otherwise excellent story:
1.)  Change the title.  It doesn't really fit very well.
2.)  The part at the end showing the future serves no purpose.  You've
already established that the photos prove the time trip happened.  If
you /really/ want to expand the story, work a little bit more on the new
Ranma/Nodoka relationship.  I think it would be fun to see how things
turn out now that they understand each other better.
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