Good afternoon, fellow writers.  Due to the file size of the 
work-in-progress I wish to post on the FFML, I can only provide the URL of 
the story in its most recent incarnation at FFN, for which I apologize.  I 
am sure that you do not want Files of Unusual Size (FOUS) chewing up your 
inboxes.

/Kansha No Namida/
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=990936

OVERVIEW: /Kansha No Namida/ is a large-scale crossover of /Bishoujo Senshi 
Sailor Moon/ and a great many fighting games, as well as /Golden Boy/ and 
/Samurai Girl Real Bout High School/.  As of this posting, four episodes of 
a planned twenty-six have been completed and revised.  The Disclaimer and 
Author's Note which open the story explain the situation more fully, but 
that is the basic sum of it.  Those who really want the nuts and bolts can 
check out a handy-dandy (optional) Reader's Guide at the following URL:

http://www.moonromance.net/dbpostview.php?pID=567432&fID=7

KNOWN ISSUES: The story takes place in 1991, but /Samurai Spirits II/, which 
the characters play in the local arcade, did not premiere in Japan until 
1994.  That has already been taken into account.  I am also correcting all 
of my /Battle Arena Toshinden/ (soon to be corrected as the original /Tou 
Shin Den/ in my references) information due to the discovery of a new, very 
good story FAQ, but I cannot post those corrections until FFN is fixed.  In 
addition to that, my writing style ... is a little funky in that it is 
archaic and overly formal.  You will see what I mean.

Apart from that, I will accept any and all comments and criticism, public or 
private, gentle or harsh.  Bluntness and honesty is welcome and encouraged 
-- if it sucks, tell me, and tell me both /why/ and /what I can do/ to 
improve it.  Grammar, punctuation, spelling, and structure are only a very 
minor worry; I am more concerned about characterization, plot, and correct 
synchronization of the various continuities.  Hit me with everything you've 
got, folks -- you're professionals, and I need good, hard critiquing.

Thank you very much for your service.

-- The Samuraiter

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