Hi there,

On Wed, 29 Jan 2003 22:31:32 +0000 R E <ranma_e@hotmail.com> wrote:

She felt a familiar excitement rushing through her veins, a hunger so
intense that she could not ignore it.  The bloodlust she had carried for
eight hundred years could never be sated, but the demons could be driven
back with an appropriate sacrifice.  {It : There} was a high price to

pay - but there

was no shortage of Hidari currency.

Hmm.  Good point, although I guess it makes sense either way.

She could feel the loss inside her; one of the souls had been destroyed,
burned, forever removed from the world.

No ... Ranma, what have you done?

You've made Akane's struggle and dilemna much clearer.

That said, it's still pretty unclear to the poor girl.  :)

Thanks for the corrections - I've made the appropriate changes to the
chapter.

Regards,
R. E.

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