Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Wed, 29 Jan 2003 22:31:32 +0000 R E <ranma_e@hotmail.com> wrote:
She felt a familiar excitement rushing through her veins, a hunger so
intense that she could not ignore it. The bloodlust she had carried for
eight hundred years could never be sated, but the demons could be driven
back with an appropriate sacrifice. {It : There} was a high price to pay - but there
was no shortage of Hidari currency.
She could feel the loss inside her; one of the souls had been destroyed,
burned, forever removed from the world.
No ... Ranma, what have you done?
You've made Akane's struggle and dilemna much clearer.
One of the sub's {ensigns : crew} stood guarding the door; he shifted aside to let
the pair pass. Ukyo did not miss the look in his eyes - it was something
a cross between the wide-eyed gaze of curiosity and the shifty-eyed glance
of suspicion. It was the look nearly every single person aboard gave her;
she had even seen it in Asukawa's eyes once or twice, quickly covered by a
veneer of authority.
"It means you're going to have this stuck to your skin," Yoiko said,
holding a thin strip of what appeared to be black rubber for Ukyo to see.
"You'll have a strip along the back of each arm, one along each leg, and
one up your spine. Other than that, you won't {noticed : notice} a thing."