Michael A Chase wrote:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Fri, 17 Jan 2003 18:03:07 -0800 Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org>
wrote:

        The silence of the house at night was disturbed only faintly
by the rustlings of tenants moving in their sleep -- a {faintcreaking : faint creaking}

>from a toss here, the scuffing of a mumbling of those nearly asleep

as they wandered to the restroom.

	Gah! And again. >_<

	Thanks for catching these typoes. :p

	Not a lot to reply to here, but I used all your sugestions. Thanks again!

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