Interesting.
My only real problem with it, at the moment, is that it is too much info all 
at once.

Leave a few pieces to be discovered along the way.  Primarily the info with 
the Jurains, and the Hibikis.

I also think you should focus a bit more info on the present, rather than 
flashbacks, but that may just be me.

Anyway, sounds just as interesting as Immortals.

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