Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Fri, 17 Jan 2003 12:53:37 -0500 DB Sommer <sommer@3rdm.net> wrote:
"Your food, My Lord." Nabiki placed the platter on a nearby stand, and began
to peel a grape for him.
I thought this was a dream sequence, now I'm sure. The other
possibliity I considered was him being at Kuno's and not yet
aware of it.
"Wow! You mean she's even hotter than you three?" Ranma gaped in disbelief
With all those clothes, of course he's hotter. I was expecting Shampoo
or Ranma's female half.
Akane continued. "It's the most beautiful servant in your entire harem, here
to serve your every need in ways we mere serving wenches could never hope to
best."
I guess he was listening when Kuno was talking earlier. How could a
mere woman know how to properly please a man. :}b
*Have quieter nightmares. You're messing up my beauty sleep,* the panda
signed.
A twenty-year coma *might* be enough.
And there's a teaser at the end of the chapter would should address some
concerns some people have indicated concerning the direction Ranma's life
has been taking.
It seems to be going straight down the sewer so far, but that's normal.
"Maybe Ranma can try to cure him the same way we tried to cure Tofu," Nabiki
said.
I'm sure that'd word. Not.
"He'll eat these. I signed them, 'With Love, Ranma Saotome'." Yuji laughed
hard.
Clever. I'm sure it will make an impression on Ranma too.
The pack was really starting to salivate when a voice from in the middle of
them said in hesitating tones, "Um, excuse me. But could you give me
directions to Furinkan High?"
I guess it was just too good a plan to be allowed to succeed.
"Hey! That's my line!" Ryouga protested, taken aback by Ranma's aggressive
attitude.
Poor Ryouga. Another nice twist on the usual theme.
"Sounds like you chickened out to me," Nabiki said, she and Akane having
followed Ranma while maintaining a safe distance from the pair {of youths :}.
"I just have a bad direction sense," Ryouga protested.
Interesting that he's willing to admit that.
"Akane Tendou!" a voice shouted from across the school yard, catching
everyone's attention, including Ranma's{: .}
Nabiki leaned in close to Kunou. "He's some character from Ranma's past.
Someone Ranma's really angry at, but he won't say why. I think it's
something pretty sordid."
It's natural she'd think so.
"The answer is painfully obvious." Kunou leveled the bokken towards Ryouga.
"This Hibiki person is a past lover of my Ranma-kun's, one who callously
betrayed his heart. Worry not, my love. I shall defend your honor with my
dying breath."
Ranma would like that last part at least.
Using the distraction Kunou provided, Ranma grabbed Ryouga by {the back :} the
front of his shirt. "Come on. We're taking this private." He then half
dragged the lost boy away from the school yard.
That sound rather kinky. Maybe it was intentional.
Ranma appeared offended. "I'll have you know just today a couple of girls
agreed to go out with me. Not at the same time, of course. On different
days, but they agreed. So there." Ranma stuck his tongue out at Ryouga.
"Anyway, I'm on a roll. I'll get you your date. Just watch."
Actually they said they'd go out with him when Hell froze over.
He's already bought a parka.
Ryouga was still staring longingly at Yumiko when he heard Ranma give a
loud, "AH!" and then felt a violent tugging at his pants. The pull was so
powerful that Ryouga's pants fell to around his ankles, despite wearing a
belt. To compound matters, the shout had grabbed everyone's attention.
Ryouga, too shocked to react simply stood motionless as everyone stared open
mouthed at him....
I was wondering when that banana would come into play.
Ryouga took no notice of Ranma's reaction. "Yumiko wouldn't even talk to me
again. She was terrified, thinking I was some kind of monstrous pervert. But
her friends didn't feel the same way. What happened afterwards was just as
horrible as her rejection, if not worse...."
I'm sure Ranma felt so.
"I think we can skip all that in-between stuff and go right to the sex
part," Misato said.
Practical.
Misato was mesmerized by the rod that was close enough for her to breathe
on. A look of regret passed her face. "I'm sorry. I thought I could handle
it at first, but there's no way I can get that in me. But I'm no dicktease.
I'll take care of you," she assured him. She grabbed onto his shaft, opened
her mouth, and directed the head of his cock inside.
At least she gets it out of sight.
Any power Ryouga had to resist immediately left him. The sensations of her
tongue making circles around the head of his shaft overrode any sense of
propriety that told him it was immoral to engage in sex before marriage. He
just stood there, drooling insensate as Misato did all the work. The
pleasure from her oral attentions was more than anything he had ever
conceived. He had never done anything with his dick, other than wash it, and
even then he was careful not to {overstimulate : stimulate} it too much. For one thing it
gave him a lot more surface area to wash, and everyone knew only perverts
masturbated. It was the sort of thing Ranma would do.
"Oh, and it got worse, much worse than just blow jobs. There was sex
involved as well. I was planning on saving myself for marriage, but I was
tricked out of my virginity," Ryouga informed Ranma in a depressed voice.
"It was after the Senior High baseball team made the regional finals. I was
invited by one of the junior cheerleaders, Achika, whose little sister was
one of Misato's friends..."
Poor Ryouga.
Ryouga blushed at the compliment. What a nice and understanding, as well as
incredibly attractive, girl. She respected his desire to be an upstanding,
virtuous individual. It was so wonderful to be recognized for his efforts.
All the junior high girls were either frightened of him or tried seducing
him because he had a large dick. Obviously older girls were different, and
respected a man for who he was instead of what he had between his legs.
Yeah, right.
Then he felt a pair of hands fondling his thighs. Tired, his eyebrows rose
quizzically as the appendages rode up the length of his hardened muscles.
All doubts about the {hands : hands'} purpose were eradicated as they went to his
waistband and began undoing his belt.
Achika appeared annoyed at the intrusion. "Yeah, Karou. I invited him
myself. Although, I have to admit even I didn't think he was this big." She
moved it back and forth to show her point, {elicting : eliciting} another groan from
Ryouga.
"Everyone calls you that. It's because of that mule-sized cock you {sport
around : carry around : sport}," Karou explained.
Ranma-chan appeared a little frightened. "Whoa there. I got to get a grip.
I'm getting paranoid thinking this poor, innocent, little piglet could be
related to Ryouga. I mean, what are the odds that he followed me to
Jusenkyou, got cursed as well, and just happened to stumble onto some water
here and was left at my mercy? Pretty silly, huh?" she asked the piglet.
Ryouga furiously nodded up and down.
Maybe he could get in good with Akane by giving her a cute pet.
Akane nodded. "Of course. You looked like you were pretty angry back there.
I didn't want you doing anything stupid. I'm sure whatever misunderstanding
you had with that Ryouga guy could be resolved peacefully."
Maybe she's heard of The Mule.
It took everything Kasumi had to keep from lashing out with some asinine
comment. Her mother had taught her that men were temperamental creatures
when it came to sex, and a few words delivered at the right time could
render them useless for weeks to months. As dull and uninspiring as the sex
had been, he had not managed to make Kasumi actually angry at him. Still,
there was no way she would endorse his performance. So instead she remained
silent. She considered recovering her panties, but noticed they had fallen
into some unidentifiable substance that had soaked into them. It was best to
leave the garment where it lie. It wasn't like she would {never : ever} wear them
again.
But due to his long journey, it had been several months that Ryouga had gone
without female accompaniment. It was almost a year without getting it
regularly. He had grown so used to constantly being forced to perform for
women that he had become desensitized to sex. Now that he had gone without
it for so long, a part of him was starting to miss it. One of the signs was
that he started having erotic dreams again, and sometimes he would walk
around with a hard on, which was very uncomfortable. Even though Ryouga
openly professed to be relieved about not having to put out constantly,
there were certain other parts of his body that wanted to get back into the
old swing of things. The frustration caused by this paradox of {decensy : decency} and
perversion was all Ranma's fault.
Kasumi's eyes were as round as saucers as she pointed and said, "That thing
can't be real, can it?" She moved forward.
Sounds like her night just got better.
With an audible pop another chibi figure appeared on Ryouga's right
shoulder. It cut a dashing figure in an impeccable tuxedo. It had slick
back, greasy, black hair tied in a ponytail with a yellow and black striped
bandanna. A toothpick dangled from his mouth like a cigarette. Chibi-Lust
snapped his fingers to get Ryouga's attention. "Yo, stupid. Get youse hands
away from dat chick's head and let her work. We got some serious hardness
going on, and need some major relief. 'Sides somethin' tells me dis chick
knows what she's doin. Don't get all wishy-washy. We got needs dat have to
be {takin : taken} care of, and she's volunteerin' ta handle it, if y'know what I
mean."
Chibi-Lust shouted out at the now empty shoulder. "That's it! Run with your
tail between your legs, you pansy. {Sides' : 'Sides} youse is just gonna come back and
blame Ranma when its all over anyways, like you always do." The diminutive
figure returned his attention to Ryouga, slapped him in the back of the
head, and ordered, "Now, let's get dis show on da road," before disappearing
as well.
Kasumi bent down slightly, removing her mini-skirt and appeared totally in
the nude, her panties left in the alley. Again she found Ryouga's burning
gaze focused upon her now {: bare : nude} body, especially what lay between her own legs.
That was nice. She was going to give him an opportunity for a closer look
and allow him to really enjoy himself.
Ryouga maneuvered behind Kasumi and went to his knees. Given her longer
legs, it made her the perfect height for him to look at her pussy, which was
at eye level. Up close, he could not help admiring how perfectly trimmed the
girl maintained herself. Obviously she groomed it meticulously, as not a
hair was out of place. The only thing that was disconcerting was the dried
residue that had been left behind from a {pervious : previous} lover. But even the
knowledge that another man had recently come inside her could do nothing to
detract from Ryouga's lust. He would just have to deal with it and get to
work.
Ranma heard the question poised from the girl above him. He was more
sensitive to the note of expectation in the voice, due to his inability to
see with her sitting on his face and all. It heightened his awareness,
letting him know this was reality and not a dream. Resolve firmed, Ranma was
about to give her what she wanted when he paused, suddenly realizing there
was one, tiny problem.
He had no idea of what to do next.
That's Sayuri and Ranma's a girl. Right?