To all the other anine fans out there, Hello!

I've enjoyed reading the many fan fictions on the net, and although not a writer myself, I like to posit possible alternitives to some of the happenings in the 

stories, somewhat in the manner of Gregg's bet series.

As I just said, I'm not a writer, so what I do is in the nature of writing outlines with the occasionial

bit of dialogue to flesh it out, that way I can follow a storyline, but still add or change the thoughts and words spoken as I like.

This will be my first and possibly only post to the net, and the reason I'm posting it is that I read an 

AMG/City Hunter crossover where Belldandy grants a wish where she almost has to become the wisher's 

lover.

This struck me because I have what would be called an AMG Divergance story where that is Keiichi's wish, and more.

DISCLAIMER: Ah! My Goddess and all characters are not my property, I'm just borrowing them for a while, and will give them back when I'm through with them only slightly used, so please don't sue me, because like all the rest of the posters, I have no money. Also, if anyone wants to take over this story because they think it has possibilities, in part or with variations, you have my permission.


By the way, in case you didn't know from the above, this is supposed to be a lemon, so if your'e under 18, don't read it. If I was to categorize this, it would be MC, NC, INC. 

AN ALTERNATE WISH

Prelude

In this universe, just before Belldandy was going to answer a phone call and give Keichi a wish, an outbreak of an especially pernicious and sneaky type of bug hit Yggsdrill, taking weeks to clear out.

When they were finally under control, Belldandy had the chance to go to earth and be with Keichi. So anxious was she to go that she took the first chance offered without updating herself on his file, which was a very big mistake.

It was a mistake because in those extra weeks, Keichi learned lessons on life and love compleatly different from those learned in the original story.


Chapter 1

Keichi was with his two Sempai, getting drunk and watching what they called "Training films."

Talking about what happened that afternoon at the races, he told them, "I can't believe I lost out to him like that, he's such an asshole."


He was replied to "Well he's rich, he can wave it round to get what he wants."

"But the only reason I lost to him was because I didn't want to go too fast, I wanted to be sure."

"Well now you know better, next time don't hesatate, go for it right away and don't give them a chance!"

"Yeah, don't give a dame a chance ta refuse ya, don't give 'em an excuse ta say no."

Being drunk, this seemed reasonable to Keiichi so he told them, "Alright, the next time I have a chance, I'll do it, I'll make sure any female I can make my lover can't say no!"

"That's the way, but we have to go to the next set of races, and because of your troubles, you stay here to look out for the dorm, and we'll see you Sunday evening. While we're gone, don't forget to study those films so you will know what to do the next time you have a chance."

On that cheery note they left, leaving Keiichi to continue to drink and watch films. This continued until he noticed that he was out of booze, whereupon he went to the phone to order some more.

This was what Belldandy was waiting for, so she intercepted the call and told him, "This is the Goddess Relief Line, one moment and someone will be with you for a consultation."

Leaving him staring at the reciever in confusion, before he even had a chance to hang up, the mirror in the hallway started glowing and a girl in ornate robes with markings on her cheeks and forehead stepped out of it.

The alcohol in his system bolstered him up while she explained she was a goddess here to grant him a wish.

When he asked if it was for anything he wanted, she answered, "Yes, money, power , a girlfriend, or anything else except the destruction of the planet."

He was struck by her mention of a girlfriend, and because she was reading his thoughts, when she heard him think, "Gosh she's pretty, I wonder what it would be like if _she_ was my girlfriend," Belldandy felt that everything was going to work out.

Just when she was getting ready to hear him make that his wish, she was disturbed to hear his next thought be "No, remember what you promised, this your chance to do it big time!"

After hearing that thought, she was shocked to hear Keiichi say, "Ok, I wish that I forever had the power to make all the females I want, (with a hard look at her), no matter who they are or how they feel about me, become my totally loyal, absolutley obediant lovers who will do anything I tell them, up to and including cheerfully bearing my babies, and I want you to be my first lover."

Before she could recover, she felt the marking on her brow swell with power and launch a beam of light to the heavens. When it returned to her, she was even more surprised to hear her voice saying, "Wish approved."

Shaking off the shock, she located the phone and caled Kami-Sama. He told her that a dormant bug in the wish approval program became active when Keiichi made his wish, and made it the highest priority approval possible, protected by the full recources of the Ultimate Power so that to reverse it would take shutting Yggdsrill down permanately.

Although impossible to alter, He would place such a security rating on the wish that no one would be able to find out what happened to her unless she told them, and he would be doing his best to find some way to correct it. 

After she hung up the phone, Belldandy turned around to see Keiichi staring drukenly at her.

"Well, does my wish hold?" He asked.

"I'm afraid it does," she answered, "You now have the power you wished for."

Keiichi had been thinking while she was on the phone about what he could do with his power. "Well then I want you to stay with me forever, protecting me and my interests with your full power. Now take those clothes off, slowly, and display yourself to me so that I can see what kind of lover I"m getting."

Even as Belldandy asked, "Keiichi please don't do this, it's not what I want," she realized that her hands were already undoing her outer robe. When that was in a puddle at her feet, her hands went on to undo the ties of of her dress.

Those actions distracted her so much that she almost missed hearing him telling her, "Well I want it, which means that you have to want it too."

And, just like that, more than anything else she wanted to be naked before Keiichi. Mindful of his command to go slowly, instead of vanishing her clothes by magic, she actively takes control of undressing herself. Dropping her dress on her robe, she stands there in just her slip, slippers and stockings. 

When she shimmied out of her slip, it revealed that Belldandy didn't wear underwear.

Even though she was blushing wildly from her nudity, the next part of his command, to display herself, had her walking over to a small table and, placing her right foot on it, showing off her cunt and the down that covered it. 

As she leaned forwrd to unbuckle her slipper and remove her stocking, her firm young breasts swung forward and back with her movements, stoking Keiichi's drunken lust, that the sight of her stripping had risen in him.

Finished with her right foot, she replaced it with her left, moving so that her back is to him. When she bends over to remove the slipper and stocking on that foot, her ass cheeks spread open, giving him a view of her asshole and her cunt from the rear.

When she was finished and had turned to face him, an excited Keiichi told Beldandy, "Come here and take _my_ clothes off now."


After she stripped Keiichi, he taught her what he'd learned from the filma, namely how to deepthroat, fuck in Missionary position and doggy style, how to use her breasts on his cock, taking it up the ass, and tajing her own virginity by mounting his cock while he lay on his back.


The alcohol in his system prevented him from climaxing for a long time, but when he finally achieved release he fell unconcious onto a tearful Belldandy.

Rolling him to the side and off her, she asked through her tears, 'Keiichi...Keiichi, what happened to you to make you like this?"

Using her mindreading powers, this is what she discovered.

FLASHBACK: Keiichi wins a race against a rich rival schools' team. A girl who was on the other team's pit crew comes up and introduces herself to him.

The girl keeps meeting him, and after a while, everybody just accepts them as a couple, except the captain of the rival team, who sets each race as a competetion between the two, instead of the schools.

On the evening of the day before a big race, the girl offered to make love to Keichii. Unfortunately, he wasn't very tactful in his rejection, being in a panic as he was.

Saying, "No! I don't think of you in that way. I need more time."

She stormed out in a huff, leaving him his usual clueless self.

That morning, the race was hard-fought but Keiichi won. When he got back to the pit he saw the girl and tried to apolagise to her.

Spurning his excuses, she then proceeds to humiliate him by saying loud enough for all his pit crew to hear, "You know, I only went out with you to make someone jealous. After a while I thought you might be interesting in your own right, but last night showed me that your'e just a wishy-washy wimp.

"You know nothing about how to handle a female, and I bet if one was really serious you'd run away. I _know_ no one would want to get married to you, and especially not want to have your babies for fear that they'd turn out just like you."

Having let loose with that vitriol, she left to console the loser of the race, the guy she wanted to get jealous in the first place.

Back at the dorm that afternoon, his sempai asked him what that was all about. When he told them, they decided to rectify his ignorance of what to do with a female by showing him what they called "Training tapes," namely Deep Throat, Debbie Does Dallas, The Virgin, and Tabboo.

That was where Belldandy entered the picture.

After reviewing what led up to today, Belldandy thought sorrowfully to to herself, "If only I had taken the time to update myself on his file, I could have waited until Keiichi had sobered up and gotten over that nasty girl."

Looking more kindly at the sleeping boy, she whispers,"I forgive you Keiichi. I just hope we find some way to fix this." Snuggling up to Keiichi, Belldandy goes to sleep herself.

When Keiichi wakes up the next morning, he has a massive hangover headache, and a very hazy memory of the last night.

He gets up and goes to the bathroom to get some asprin, then goes to the kitchen to get a glass of water.to wash it down with, noticing the dorm was cleaner then he remembered.

Suprising him, he finds a note on the icebox, saying, "Keiichi, I've gone to get some groceries, I'll e back in a little while. Belldandy"

This note jolts his memory, making him remember the night just passed. The shock is so much that he grabs one of the remaining saki bottles and uses that to down the asprin.

Taking the bottle with him into the den, he sits in front of the T.V. and drinks the rest of the bottle while trying to figure out what had gone on last night.

When he was at the bottom of the the bottle, Keiichi noticed the the VCR light was still blinking on and off. Wondering what's on, he uses the remote to turn it on, to discover that Taboo was still in. He was watching it again when a leg started coming out of the T.V..

The leg was followed by the body of a dusky-skinned, silver-haired female who stood in front of him and looked around the room.

Staring at her with drunken lechery, Keiichi asked, "Are you a Goddess too?"

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Thats it for this section.  If readers like it, please let me know by giving C&C. I have an expanded version, so let me know if you would like me to post it. 


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