Now that I'm cured of my Baldur's Gate addiction, time to start a little C+C
on the old backlog:

Heh heh heh. I'm baaaaaack (for just a little bit. And here I thought grad

school

was going to be easier).

Right. Like it ever gets easier.

****
     A fine sheen of sweat covered Ranma-chan. Every so often, a few

droplets would

gather around her curves to take advantage of those shifting curves to

slowly collect

and become real drops, slowly

two slowlys and two curves close together. I'd change them to something
else.

 meandering their way down her mostly bare form. But far

from being uncomfortable, the sweat only served to heighten Ranma-chan's

anticipation.

     It had taken a long time to get to this point she

point, she

 admitted to herself

(or himself). The agonizing wait while the heat on her body just kept on

building

higher and higher. It was almost as if she was being teased with this

wait.

drop after 'being teased.' Unneccesary and redundent with the previous
'wait'

 Just when

she though she could take no more, she found the heat intensifying and her

tolerance

rising to match it, like two hawks she once saw climbing into the sky in

China,

performing their acrobatic mating dance.
     But now, like those hawks that had finally parted to just soar cool

and level

high above the earth, the heat was no longer a distraction, rather it was

a small

lift to her, a moment to be savored as her prize now stood with in her

grasp.

     And what a prize it was too, tall and slender, it just waited for

her.

It's here I finally guessed what it is, in combination with the title. It
was the dwelling on the heat part. Cute.

     Ranma-chan's blue eyes flickered up, seeking approval as she

hesitantly reached.

Deep brown eyes reflected back acceptance and a hint of impatience.

Permission had

been granted and now anticipation from the other party started to grow as

Ranma

reached out for what she had been waiting for so long.
     Delicate fingers reached out and slowly slid along the form in front

of her,

bringing it every so closer, drawing small paths in the thin watery sheen

that covered

what she sought. Fingers that could perform the most advanced martial art

techniques

and crush steel now gently closed on the treasure that had been presented

to her.

Nice way of going about it.

     Ranma's ruby red lips parted to take in the long instrument of her

delight. A

small sigh escaped the owner of those brown eyes as they surveyed the

unfolding scene,

tensing with anticipation as Ranma slowly, ever so slowly, drew the thing

she was

after fully into her lush mouth.
     For Ranma it was heaven. The tip was slightly moist with the delight

that she

sought, nay, yearned for with all of her being. Just a hint of taste, the

barest hint

of what was to come. But for that ultimate treat, she would need to work

for it.

     She started at a slow pace, tilting her head slightly as she started

to suck. No

need to rush now, it would be all the better for the wait after all. Her

sensual

Heh.

     Ranma smiled, the corners of her mouth still stained and slightly

sticky with the

liquid that she recently had drank, and drank deeply, of.
     "Thanks, Akane", she said, wiping away the sweat of a hot Nerima

summer's day,

"You might not know how to boil water, but you sure do know how to make

lemonade!"

Akane smiled. It was wonderful. Ranma thought she had done a good job. Next
time she'd surprise him by throwing in some cayanne pepper and give the
lemonade some kick.

And now, if you'll excuse me, I have to run for my life from all those who

WERE

expecting a real lemon, not a glass of lemonade.

I'm in the mood for a lemonade now. None around. Thanks. :P

Cute. It worked for me. Thanks for sharing.

D.B. Sommer

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