Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Sat, 11 Jan 2003 09:06:30 +0000 tabyk@attbi.com wrote:
Opening the door I was greeted by the sight of an older
woman dressed in a very traditional kimono. She looked middle
aged, probably younger {then : than} Father, with short black hair and a
pleasant smile. Giving me a short and courteous bow she then
said, "Greetings. My name is Saotome Nodoka, I was hoping Tendo
Soun was in. If so, may I please speak with him?"
He was tall, about my height in fact, but had a quiet,
almost small, bearing about him. Like his mother, he had black
hair, though it was long and tied back in the pigtail, and vivid
blue eyes. His skin was also darker {then : than} hers.{.. :}
Then with a great, almost laborious, sigh he said, "Okay. I
will teach Ranma my skill in the Anything Goes {Martial Art :} style.
Bring him back on Tuesday, and I will assess him." This time it
was she who bowed, her son mimicking her, before she stood and
said, "Thank you."