Aaron E Nowack <anowack@juno.com> wrote:
Also, isn't Usagi's fathers name Kenji, not Kenchi? I could be wrong
though...
Yup, Kenji is correct.
"That was odd," Usagi said thoughtfully. "I
wonder why
'her highness' stopped Flash?"
"Beryl's not a queen, Usagi," Ami said, said, using napkins to get
as much
tomato sauce out of her hair as she could.
...Beryl... as a junior high student. The mind boggles.
She's not a queen - maybe a princess? Aeka's videoclip "Oujo-sama to
oyobi" comes to mind - and would be very fitting... ^_^
Of fifteen warriors, proud and strong who opposed those dark forces.
Need a comma after strong. Suggest also changing to "strong, opposing
those forces."
Hmm... fifteen? Let's see... nine Senshi (assuming you count Sailor
Moon/Princess Serenity), Endymion and his four guardians makes
fourteen... who would be the fifteenth then? Beryl? Or am I totally
off base here? ^_^
The 8 usual Senshi with Sailor Moon/Serenity and Tuxedo Mask/Endymion, accompanied
by Sailor Chibi Moon and her 4 Asteroid Senshi (former Amazon
Quartett) would be 15. I left the Starlights out, but they're from a
different solar system so they shouldn't count... ^_^
Ja
Christian "Schobronics" Schober