There's little for me to add, really... not that anything I'll add will have any real merit.

I smiled, a bit confused, and then wondered why there were so many characters involved for such a short fic. Such slowed the whole thingy down. The whole joke was tripped up in all the legs (cause it was a pretty big crowd, you have to admit).

It was spam though, so I guess I needn't really break a sweat trying to think about it.

If you do intend to revise this, then it'd be nice to see  bit more of the Cat people, as I'm a fool who falls in love with even spammed on the spot characters. But this is really only my opinion.

Troy Thomas

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