----- Original Message -----
From: Robert Haynie Jr. <kenjiko2@knology.net>
To: ffml <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Friday, January 03, 2003 3:31 AM
Subject: [FFML] Ranma (Spamfic) True Affection

A true sign of... affection.

By Robert Haynie.

I have to agree with Brian Randall on this fic. The setup was irrelevant to
the payoff, and in addition to that it was too... haughty.

When I was reading the exposition, talking about how badass Ranma was, I
wanted to hit whoever was speaking. I found the tone insufferable, very
stuck-up even though the characters were not talking about themselves. If
you ever re-write this, I'd implore you to change the dialogue to get around
this. Of course, that might just be me.

I don't have much else to comment on, as it WAS a spamfic.



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