--- Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org> wrote:
A pink gi. Well, I seem to remember it working in Street Fighter...
kind of.
Stone Cold Dan Hibiki.
... nevermind.
Stone Cold Ken Masters! Oh, wait, that was in the MVFC. Actually, Dan
got to be champion there for a quite remarkably long time....
As always, ignore any C&C you don't like. :p
ACK! A tongue stuck out at me! I'm fatally discouraged! *falls over*
Needs...me...Snapple.... (pops open a bottle with a pipe and quaffs the
confidence-restoring beverage within)
Ahh, much better. And I can STILL dig it. :)
Pulling out his battle-worn, yet unbelievably sturdy, black trench-coat
from his dresser, he put it on, along with his black dress shoes and
black fedora. His uniform completed, he beckoned across the room to his
suitcase, which telepathically heeded the wishes of its owner and
flew neatly into his outstretched hand.
Ah, yes. The Trench. Eric always did wonder where it ended up next....
Exactly. :)
...who's Eric?
The Yotsuya Rowboat gently lifted out of the water and let its owner
on board before noisily powering up in a bright and flashy pyrotechnic
display, spinning around towards land, and launching in a silent arc
over the top of the house and through the sky, its destination known
only to Mr. Yotsuya himself.
As an aside, I happen to think that this world is awesome. I just like
the casual flying rowboats, etc.
...still not quite sure where I originally got this idea from. But hey,
people seem to like it. :)
"Heh, it'll probably end up being some girl and her pet panda that
we'll be sticking in Mr. Yotsuya's room. Imagine the look on his face
if THAT happened," Nabiki chuckled inwardly at that particular mental
image as she put away the piles of homework into a nearby organizing
drawer.
I sense Pereshte's lingering influence.
From in the future, even.
"Well, Mr. Yotsuya just left a few minutes ago, so he probably wouldn't
do too much right away. Anyway, I'm heading out for my morning exercises,
so I'll might be back in a little while, or not. It all depends on how
soon Tatewaki tires out." She grinned and waved briefly, then jogged
downstairs.
Nabiki finished sorting the documents into the cabinet, closed it,
and suddenly stopped in her tracks, a confused look on her face.
"Wait...where did THAT come from?"
I'm not clear on exactly what 'that' is... I'm guessing it's Akane's
new tennis partner.
Intentionally vague. Insert your own explanation here.
(or, it could be the first onset of Nabiki-II's yelling)
"Ah well," she continued, thinking out loud, "at least if there's any
water in this dust bin, it'll probably be warm enough to change back
with..."
Elipses, etc. etc. etc. :)
Yup, yup.
"Hiryuu....Hiryuu Shohokodan, it worked. It worked! I DID IT!!" he
yelled in triumph, leaping to his feet and jumping around like a young
child with a shiny new toy. "I did it...now, Ranma Saotome! You're going
DOWN, do you hear me?! DOWN!! BWAAHAHAHAHAhuh?"
Yes... attacks that leave you KOed are always good. :p
He's gotta start somewhere. :)
Pereshte boldly hid in plain sight, holding a cup of hot tea and
silently chuckling at his own cleverness. They all said it was daft
to write an insurance policy in the spot where he did, but he did it
anyway! It sank into the swamp. However, since that was exactly what
it was SUPPOSED to do, he didn't make a second one.
Or, rather, won't make a second one. No need for it in the future, he
reminded himself, since when he did(wioll haven done) he remained(willan
on-remain) exactly where he would be, WITH what he would have been
having(mayan havian on-been), whenever he'd need(waten haven on-need) it,
and that was all that mattered(and will have mattered, previously on) for
the moment.
All of these open parenthesis marks should be preceeded by a space. No
spacing is needed internal to the paranthetical statements, but it is
needed externally, possibly exceptiong punctuation.
Weird thing is, I actually KNEW this at the time, but it still slipped by
me. Huh. Will fix.
Pereshte watched them continue on their way in silence.
But the tea, Dannycat! The tea! What of the TEA?!
It was delicious! :)
Hopefully you found some of this helpful. :p
AIE! *collapses* There's...always...room...for...Jell-O...!
--
Brian Randall
--
Who feels like he's talking too loudly, and no one wants to hear him at
the moment, and yet, doesn't stop.
--
Haiku of my lament:
Forgive my spelling,
my U.S. education,
is the source of blame.
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