Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fic][Ranma] Chocolate Oranges Pi (Part 1): The Self-Serve Deli at the End of the Galaxy
From: "Larry F" <lwf58@socal.rr.com>
Date: 1/3/2003, 4:44 PM
To: "'Rylan Hilman'" <sabremau@yahoo.com>, "'Brian Randall'" <brian@azurite.org>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>


	Hmm. Double-punctuation is technically a no-no, but 
I'll usually accept 
'!?' without complaint -- it makes enough sense. I'm not so 
sure about 
'!!', however.

  I like interrobangs, though. And as for the repeated 
punctuation...well, I
know it's technically incorrect, but it's just so fun an' 
fuzzy at times.
 
	This is a stylistic issue, seemingly, even though there 
are technical 
rules for it (don't). However, I think you can leave it as 
it is, and 
still have the story be perfectly readable.

  Indeed, quite stylistic. I do draw the line at things such 
as fifteen 
exclamation marks that turn into 1's at the end because the effort of 
screaming causes the strength of the shift-key hand to give 
out at the 
last moment. :)


	It's a visual effect.  If used with moderation, visual effects
can be quite useful and enhance a story.  However, they would not be
acceptable in professional writing.

	BTW, Brian... The accepted order of that spelling effect is
"?!", not "!?".  ^__^




  "Hello, m'lady. I suppose...you have noticed by now 
what I came to
tell you."  He clasped his hands in front of his grey 
congressional robe
and looked down.  "Your budget allocation has been 
diverted onto a rider
bill by Senator Chaloria, and she is currently running a 
twelve-day
filibuster attempt to keep it from being passed."

	Is 'm'lady' a proper title?

  Contraction of "my lady"? Hm, dunno.

	There actually is an accepted spelling for that contraction:
"milady".


  "She is speaking at length on the migratory habits of 
certain species
of birds, I believe. In any case, the payment deadline of 
the energy
allocation for your laboratory passed but a few moments 
ago, despite our
most principled attempts to extend it. I am truly sorry, 
madam."  He
bowed in humble respect.

	Same for 'madam'.

  Aw, now I'm REALLY confused. :)

	"Madam" is the correct word.  It's one of those myriad of words
we (er, the Brits before us) stole from old French: "ma dame",
literally, "my lady".  The contraction is "ma'am".

     Ja mata,
     Larry F

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