Bira wrote:

On Thu, 26 Dec 2002 04:37:28 +0000
David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net> wrote:

First of all, all comments are IMHO.

Project Pandora

Nice writing, and I got somewhat curious to see what happens next. Also,
it's very nice to see an original BGC story! It's a good respite from
all that Ranma and Sailor Moon, and a show I like more than those two.

However, I suspect this "new foreign group" is coming across as a bunch
of "annoying new characters". The story seems to take place after the
original OVAs and by that point the Knight Sabers are true pros (if they
weren't already when it all started). It seems these people got the jump
on them too easily, both when stealing the secrets of the hardsuits and
when "neutralising" Nene. 

In the latter case, you are perfectly correct.  My problem is, I'm stuck
on how Fargo is going to evade pursuit.  Sylia has to try to track 
Fargo, but Fargo knows that, and has to have an escape planned.  
I'm open to suggestions.  I suppose that's the real reason why I 
posted the teaser.  I'm stuck.  

If they have enough resources to steal

hardsuit plans from the Sabers, 

Ah.  Well.  They don't.  That's not how they got them.  Thinking that's
what happened is part of what brings them into conflict with Sabers, but
that's not the way it happened.  The Agents are (collectively) 
less formidable than the Sabers in terms of combat ability
but they aren't the heros of the story.  Nothing will be told from their
viewpoint.  It's all about Sylia solving the mystery, finding out something
she'd rather not know, and then deciding what to do, now that she knows.  
She can trash the Agents once she finds out what their secret is, but 
should she?


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