Bob Schroeck wrote:
Brian Randall wrote:
DB Sommer wrote:
"'Stolen kisses are, a part of a sweet youth that, vanishes
think you'd be better off dropping the commas.
It's a haiku. Those denote the line breaks. I'll leave 'em in since it's
preferable to breaking the entire thing up just to preserve the format.
The "standard" way of denoting line breaks for poetry quoted in prose
is to use slashes:
"'Stolen kisses are/a part of a sweet youth that/vanishes
Or at least, that's the way I learned it.
Ah, excelent. Will update accordingly.
Hmm. I seem to have several hundred k of fic that I've updated and never
submitted to Larry F.
Whoops. ^_^;;
Thanks for the information, however, it is much appreciated.
-- Bob
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