Gary Ee wrote:

Yep, what I've been threatening to do for more than a year now has

finally

seen the light of day. 'Things' isn't abandoned, I just needed a break

is

all. And this idea has been on the backburner for some time. So close

your

eyes and cover your ears...

You're going to sing a medley of the Backstreet Boy's Greatest Hits in
falsetto F sharp?

Just me singing period would do it, but I'm not that cruel.

Prologue

The early morning hour made Kasumi Tendou yawn. She raised one hand to

her

mouth while she continued frying vegetables in the skillet with the

other.

She observed their blackening condition through bleary eyes, satisfied

at

"Blackening" has such scary connotations, much like Akane's cooking.

Blackening means you're giving it flavor is all.

their progress. Sometimes cooking for her family was a chore, but she

did

care for them and her willingness to do such was her way of expressing

that.

There was also the fact that had Kasumi not done it, Akane would quickly
volunteer to take her place, and then it would be over for all of them.

No,

it was simply better this way.

At least this Kasumi is neither a saint nor completely oblivious to her
surroundings.

Nope. She knows how to have a good time as well...

she

could party all night long, grab a couple hours of sleep, and be wide

awake

and ready for a full day of school. Now all it took was a six pack and a
couple hours of dancing to tire her out; it was disgraceful.

Maybe its the the fact that Yui kept necking her. And those hickeys took
forever to heal. Although Kasumi had to admit that Yui had the best Sakura
fragrance she had ever encountered. (See Vampire Princess Yui)

Not familiar with that one.

even

Yui had some luck with a couple of cute guys hitting on her. Maybe now

that

Kasumi was out of high school, she was beginning to turn frumpy. She

hoped

that wasn't the case, but why else would she have no luck with guys

trying

to pick her up?

Maybe its the broadsword. Oops, wrong fic.

Yep. Can't get my failed experiment out of your mind, can ya? :)

several plastic bags in his hands. There was nothing extraordinary about
him; he was a standard pimply-faced sixteen year old, one Kasumi didn't
recognize. She wondered if he was one of Akane's friends. It wasn't a

school

day, but perhaps she had agreed to do something early today.

Ah, this reality's Akane doesn't "hate boys".

Ah... no. Definitely not.

Then it finally clicked "Oh, the groceries." Kasumi decided she must

have

been really tired to have forgotten about their delivery this morning.
Cooking was bad enough, but she refused to do the shopping as well.

Having

groceries delivered made things so much easier. "Come inside," she
instructed him.

"Not on the first date."

Hehehe. Should have seen that one coming myself.

Kasumi looked around. Of course her purse would be upstairs, and she had

no

money on her. She was about to tell the boy to wait a moment when a

second

idea came to her. She stood in front of him, undid the tie at her waist

and

opened her robe.

Then the boy dropped his pants and it was all Kasumi could do to not break
into uproarious laughter. He *was* rather young for this kind of fun.

Ouch. Now you're being cruel.

Kasumi retied the robe and closed the door. Oh yes, she still had what

it

took.

A bit of Nabiki as well........

Kasumi: Not really. I'm built much better than her.

Since this is a lemon, no one under eighteen should read this for fear

of

having your eyes burn out of your head.

Or never wanting to leave the keyboard ever again.

Heh.

Writer's note: Yep, we're going to start at the very beginning again,

but

hopefully the twists will keep you interested. We're going to be humor
oriented this time out. There will be an underlying plot to everything,

so

it's not a true PWP lemon, but it's definitely not meant to be a very
'serious' work either. It's really nothing more than an excuse for some
basic naughtiness and good fun.

Two great tastes taste great together. Except fugu and nori flavoured
ice-cream.

I don't even want to go there.

red-haired girl. The pair were running through the streets, the girl

barely

managing to stay ahead of the giant creature.

And the fact that she was stark-naked didn't help. It would be a bad day

for

Nerima General Hospital as they had to deal with the influx of traffic
accident victims.

Nope. Not that fanservicy... yet.

The girl shouted, "No way, you stupid old tub of lard! I want to find a
cure

to my condition! The only reason I came back to Japan was because you

told

me you knew someone that could fix this! I should have known better!"

After all these years Ranma still trusts what his father says? Einstein

he's

not.

Hope springs eternal.

Still lying on the street, the panda held up a sign. *He has three

teenage

daughters.*

"What do they look like?"

"Growf!" <Pulls out picture of Soun> (Probably like him but with longer
hair)

"... I'm going back to China old man!"

Hehehehehe. That would scare anyone away all right

be

communicated on its animalistic features. However, whatever expression

the

creature held disappeared as it lumbered down the street, its human
companion following merrily along.

After all, after screwing with an entire village of Amazons, a soft, local
girl would be nice.

You'll find out the results of his visit to the village by chapter 4, I
think.

issue

would not make a bit of difference when it came time to make a choice.
Either they would accept things or they would not. In the latter case it
would fall to him to convince them of the necessity of the matter.

Promises

had to be upheld, after all, and this was possibly the most important of
them all.

"Now girls, when Akane was born I made a promise with my old friend Genma.
All of you have to participate in his son's Rite of Manhood. He must

perform

adequately for at least twenty-four straight hours or his mother will

force

him to commit seppuku."

"........"

"Daddy, did we ever mention that you have really wierd friends?"

"Oh my, a man who can go only twenty-four hours isn't very 'dilligent' is
he?"

"Exactly my point Sis."

No. They aren't quite that bad.

Now the moment of truth was upon him, even more quickly than he would

have

expected. Today was the date mentioned on the card. Obviously the mail
service was becoming inept if it took them that long to deliver a mere
postcard.

Considering that it came from China, its a wonder he even got the postcard
in the first place. I wonder if there ever was an Elseworlds where the
postcard was never delivered?

Would just make their arrival more of a surprise is all

he thought would express the importance of the matter. Satisfied, he

raised

Which he learned from the Kundali Masters at the centre of the Earth and
involved more contortions than most legal contracts.

That one went over my head, I confess.

his hand to his mouth and shouted out, "Kasumi! Nabiki! Akane!" There

could

be no doubt the cry reached throughout his home. The final wheel had

been

set in motion.

He listened for the sounds of running feet only to hear a faint moan from
Nabiki's room. Soun then resigned himself to a long wait.

Heh. No scenes for Nabby yet.

Soun cleared his throat. "I have something very important to inform you
about. A friend of mine is arriving with his son today, and they are

going

to be staying with us for a while."

"Just as one of you will be the inheritor of the Tendo Anything-Goes
Orgy-Ken, his son is the heir to the Saotome-Ryu Tantric Kickboxing. It is
our wish to unite the two schools."

Not quite that silly either.

Akane stared at her sister in disappointment. "Nabiki, they're guests

and

Dad's friends. It doesn't matter how long they're going to stay."

Rare to see such a hospitable Akane.

She'e more open minded about guys and her sisters aren't trying to force him
on her.

Soun placed his hand behind his head and laughed embarrassingly.

The response made all three of the girls tense up. Nabiki took the lead.
"All right Daddy, spill it. What aren't you telling us?"

"Well, you see there's just this little problem with Ranma. When he was
young, his father threw him into a pit of ravenous succubi and the boy has
never been the same since. He cowers from women but the moment they

disrobe

he becomes a veritable monster of lust."

Heh. Now that would be an interesting twist.

intention

to have one of you marry the boy. Joining the schools and such. Saotome

and

I came up with the idea and thought it a good idea at the time." He

laughed

again.

"Daddy, every idea you had when you were drunk was 'a good idea at the
time'."

Aren't they always, though?

Akane stared with disapproval at her sisters. "Come on, you guys.

There's

more to men than just how good they are at sex."

"How strong they are so that they can dominate you is important as well."

Heh. It wouldn't hurt.

Nabiki continued. "And then there's their perfectly gentlemanly attitude
towards you instead of looking at you like a piece of meat they want to
devour. Of course one must consider the reason for that being-"

Well I always did regard Akane as the least attractive of the Tendo

sisters.

Of the female Ranma cast actually.

Yet she has no shortage of admirers. So it's a moot point.

Deciding to get back some of her own, Akane said, "Why are you

interested

anyway? I thought you were going out with Matsui."

"That was last month."

Close.

Nabiki shrugged. "Yeah. Evidently blow jobs weren't enough to keep him

in

line anymore."

"You have fleeced him out of a lot of money," Akane reminded her.

No matter how the universe changes, Nabiki will always be Nabiki.

Well, as much as I change it, got to make it close to the originals as I can
manage.

Akane turned a bright shade of red. "That was only because I lost a bet!

It

was a one time thing! And It wasn't the whole team! A lot of them had
girlfriends and refused, and others weren't interested in that sort of
thing!"

"And I couldn't walk straight for a month!"

Akane; Nah. I got better resilence than that. It was a week.

"Never underestimate what a man will go through with the temptation of

free

sex placed before him," Nabiki said sagely.

Wiser words were hardly spoken.

Agree.

Kasumi said, "That's impressive. I only did four a couple of times back

in

high school. It was never very enjoyable. Boys tend to be very quick and

get

in the way of one another when they try anything at the same time, so I

gave

up on that sort of thing. Oh my, is there something wrong, Father?"

"Nothing, nothing. Just as apoplectic fit (no that's not a typo). WAAH! MY
DAUGHTERS ARE ALL NYMPHOMANIACS!"

Oh, as we are about to learn, he is more than well aware of that and long
ago ruined any chane he could take a stand against their behavior.

Nabiki said, "Yeah. I mean, you let her keep working as a 'Full-Service'
Masseuse even after we were born. She talked shop constantly and you

never

complained."

"It was either that or eat mallet."

Heh. No. She wasn't violent in that way.

"Everything we learned about sex came from her," Kasumi said wistfully.

"Which definitely helped our popularity," Nabiki quipped.

I'll say.

Oh yes. That it has.

energy to fight the matter (literally, since she could still wear him

out

even on top of her job) and so the girls were like this. It made for a

very

trying fatherhood.

And an obscene contraceptives bill.

Too true.

"I'm happy you're so receptive to the idea of Ranma coming to live

here,"

Soun lied. Some secrets were best left where they were, like buried

under

tons of rubble with spirit wards placed on them.

All good things...........

Yep. More on Happi later, of course.

"Now, Father, keep in mind none of us said we'd marry him," Kasumi

reminded

him.

Now if only this universe's Ranma was a blazing homosexual with utterly no
interest in the Tendo girls, it might get highly interesting to see if
they'd compete to "bring him around".

Heh.

Silence met Soun.

However, the encounter didn't last long.

"Encounter" might not be the best word. "Situation" might work better.

Since it's 'met' i use in the line above, I think 'encounter' works best.

maimed

people behind him and has a bunch of people trying to kill him and he
fixates on me and I don't realize he's nuts and end up inadvertently

being

his accomplice when I try to defend him from those seeking righteous
vengeance?"

"Not that this has ever happened before, mind.

Eheheheheheheh............."

The other Tendos began to inch slowly away from Akane.

"I always knew that Hibiki boy was trouble."

"Oh, shut up Kasumi."

What Can I say? Couldn't resist the gratuitous commentary on my part.

"I have faith that Saotome raised the boy right," Soun said. Raising him
away from Nodoka could only help in that regard. "However, if the boy is
completely unsuitable, I will dissolve the arrangement. Ah, there is one
other thing, though. I think it would be best if you don't mention

your...

colorful pasts."

"So Kasumi went berserk and killed an entire chapter of the local Yakuze.
Big deal."

Nope. Still got that whole "Magical Girl Bloodmaker' locked in there, eh?

"Well, perhaps not bragging about your exploits would suffice," Soun
relented. "Some men are uneasy around women how openly boast about their
experiences, and Ranma might be the type that's easily intimidated."

Little does he know that Ranma is the kind to never back down from a
challenge.

True. That remains the same.

That brought the remaining three Tendous to the front door. Standing on

the

front step in front of the doorway  was a large panda and a short girl.

"Hi, I'm Ranma Saotome. Sorry about this," she said with a smile.

The words are familiar but the smile is new. Perhaps a leer would work.

Nah. Nothing to leer about yet. There will be plenty later, though.

"Maybe that's what he started out as, but I'd say the end result is
something else." Nabiki poked the newcomer's breast. "Silicone

enhancement

if ever I saw it."

Actually silicone would work poorly unless there were already a

substantial

amount of adipose around the mammary gland. Especially considering how
"healthy" Ranma-chan is.

Just showing a bit of cynicism on Nabby's part.

When the handling lasted longer than a mere poke, and traveled more into
'groping' territory, Nabiki pinched the flesh on the back of the

offending

appendage. The pain made Ranma-chan wince and release her hold.

Hmm, never seen him ever give up so easily.

Ranma doesn't go too far over the line when it comes to groping.

Ranma-chan was about to say something, when Akane stepped between the

two,

"Nabiki stop making fun of Ranma. If someone wishes to change their

gender

then they should have the right to do so without having people harass

them."

Well, this Akane is a lot more understanding that her usual self. The
bathroom scene ought to be interesting though.

Hopefully the change will be satisfying.

"Yeah, what they said. It just wasn't what I was expecting was all,"

Nabiki

said.

"But then again, Pitt-sama is unlikely to step into Nerima soon."

Hmm. Went over my head again.

Ranma-chan was about to say something else, and just gave up. "Mind if I
clean up?" she finally asked.

Kasumi ushered him inside. "Of course. The bath is this way."

Would Akane kiss him or kill him? Hmm............

ye shall see soon.

would

admit), but she had vowed to change her ways for him. If she persevered

long

enough, he would see the truth, realize her sincerity, judge her to be
worthy, and then they would be together.

"Which would happen the same time Kuno bought a clue," thought Akane as

she

sighed heavily, stark reality intruding into her fantasies once again.

Heh.

the girl. Acceptance was the way to go. She'd be Ranma's friend and help
him/her anyway she needed. In a non-romantic way, of course. She had no
interest in girls, even if a lesbian was one of her best friends. And

since

Ranma wanted to be a girl, Akane would regard 'her' as such.

Even if all of her friends had their weekly "slumber parties" without her.
Maybe Ranma would like to join them if her proclivities still lay in the
fairer gender.

Heh.

additions that were so bad, but knowing that parts (parts Akane had

enjoyed

on other men) had been cut off and tossed out in the garbage was kind of
creepy.

Or preserved in formaldehyde and used as a teaching tool for college
students, pick your poison.

Yuck. I don't want to think about it even

the

time. No more unexpected sex changing. No more chaos or crazy people

trying

to hunt him down and kill him over stupid misunderstandings. He would

have

peace at last.

Ah, his stop in the Amazon village was less than pleasant I see. I thought
that he might have gone the way of most Altered Destinies and made a baby
with Shampoo.

Nope. No children here.

couldn't score with the chicks. Moving around most of the time hadn't
allowed him to get to know any girls. The few times he had settled down

in

one place for any real length of time... well, there were always
complications of some kind that destroyed any chance of romance, let

alone

cheap sex. And the biggest complication of all had been...

Incontinence, which could be really embarrassing in bed.

_<

out of the bath and headed towards the sliding partition in the

bathroom,

lost deep in thought of how he was going to explain his curse to the

girls.

Well this might be a good way. Show them just how much of a man he really
was.

Heh. True.

come. His body automatically tensed up (well, the rest of his body

tensed

up; the part between his legs had already begun to do just that upon

seeing

a naked girl) as he prepared to receive the thunderous slap she would
unleash upon him.

I see he has experience in rejection but not the deed itself.

Yep.

Akane said, "Look, from now on tell your boyfriends to put the occupied

sign

on the bath when they're using it. I walked in there and the jerk got a

free

show."

"But Akane, you always give out free shows."

"Not unless I want to!"

Yep.

Now a party two, the pair headed to Kasumi's room and knocked on the

door.

After identifying themselves, she let them in.

One could never be too careful who one lets into one's room especially if
she were planning on conquering the world and making sex-slaves out of the
entire male populace.

Nice to see I have permenantly scarred you for life. :)

Kasumi was just starting to dress. At the moment all she wore were a

lacy,

almost see-through, black bra that enhanced her already ample bust., and

a

matching garter with one nylon already attached it. She was in the

process

of rolling the second one up her long, trim leg. All that was left was

to

attach the remaining nylon and add panties to the ensemble before her
undergarments would be complete. She stopped what she was doing,

unmindful

of her partially dressed state, and said to her sisters, "What is it?"

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<Collapses on keyboard with a terminal nosebleed>

Thought that would be a nice fanservicy shot.

"Getting ready for a hot date?" Nabiki asked.

"No, I was just going to wear something casual around the house," Kasumi
answered.

"Not exactly my idea of casual," Akane commented as she looked the

underwear

over and felt a twinge of jealousy. She wouldn't look that good in such
sensual garments.

Came from the flat chest and wide hips.

Nah. She's not that small or unpleasently wide.

"Makes things easier in my opinion. Less hassle," Nabiki said.

"Tear away underwear is also fun."

:)

the

sight of the tiny triangle of hair between her legs, obviously

meticulous

maintained in order for it to be so perfect shaped. Not a hair was out

of

place. It was like a work of art.

I would delete "like" so as to confirm Ranma's opinion of Kasumi's nether
regions.

Okay.

you're

some sort of peeper that broke into the house hoping for some cheap

thrills.

Well, I've got news for you, Pal. What you're going to get isn't going

to

be

either cheap or thrilling." She cracked her knuckles.

"Okay, unless you're into pain but that's not something I can help."

Sneaking into the Tendo household looking for Akane would be the perfect

way

a masochist Gosungki would get his kicks for example.

True. Not saying he is, though.

go

all out against you." She launched a third punch at him.

At least she hasn't tried to kick him in the jewels yet.

Not here. They are a valuable resources in her eyes. :)

"Would you cut it out?!" Ranma said, directing his attention to Akane,

who

was already starting to return to her feet.

With an evil smile, Akane said, "normally I have much better uses for 'it'
than that." Seeing Ranma's slack-jawed expression, Akane triumphantly
uppercut him into next Thursday. "Sayonara sucker," Akane snickered at
Ranma's diminishing form.

Not quite, but close.

"It was for our protection," Nabiki contended. "It was obvious he was

way

better than Akane. We needed an equalizer and that was the only one I

had

on

hand."

"Next time use your own!"

"Come on Oneechan, you know you love it."

Kasumi the Flasher? Has a nice ring to it. :)

Akane considered that. "He was definitely in real good shape. It's

obvious

he works out constantly, but not with big body builder type muscles.

He's

kind of good-looking. Average length from what I could tell. It is just

an

estimate since he wasn't at full extension or anything."

Well considering spinal damage can cause erections (peripriatism), they
might find out sooner than they'd expected.

He wasn't hit quite that hard.

Kasumi looked at her aghast. "We can't just tie up any wandering

stranger

who comes around and use him as a giant sex toy." She reconsidered her
words. "Well, yes, it is theoretically possible, but highly improper. If
word ever got out we'd have people trying to break into our home
constantly."

I know I would. :P

Heh.

Nabiki snorted derisively at that. "It would be more humane to drown him

in

the pond out back then leave him to them. You know how our local
constabulary feels about 'Pre-verts'," Nabiki drawled the last word.

"Perverts"?

Nope. The reason for that pronounciation is obvious in the second chapter.

Akane said, "I could tie him up and hang him upside down from a tree.

Then

we could start beating him with kendo sticks. We have enough of them in

the

dojo."

Shinai or bokken. Probably shinai due to the bamboo's nasty habit of
catching flesh.

Right.

"Treat him like a giant pi�ata?" Nabiki asked, mentally picturing it in

her

mind. "I can see that."

Kasumi gave a tiny clap of her hands in delightful anticipation. "Oh, I

like

hitting pi�atas. This sounds like it could be fun."

"I'll get the ropes," Akane said, quickly heading to the dojo

Trust Akane to advocate "Peace Through Superior Firepower" policies.

Not that the other girls think it's a bad idea.

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unbridled enthusiasm he would have dreamed about, he still held deep
reservations about the whole thing. Perhaps it would have been better to
wait a while, at least until after he and the boy had their respective
curses cured.

NOW he thinks of getting the curse cured first.

But we'll see why he did keep it.

be

a problem, but if they were the least bit normal in their tendencies, it
would potentially be disastrous. This was a critical time for the

joining

of

the houses. Any small mistake could cost them everything, and the

marriage

might not take place.

Like turning up at the Tendo doorstep as a panda and a girl? Introspection
really doesn't become Genma.

Heh.Well, at least he's trying.

and tremendous sexual appetite proved too great a strain over the long

term.

So Genma had been forced to steal away with the boy in the middle of the
night, hoping to take him away from her harmful influences before it was

too

late.

One of the first times that the "training trip" was undertaken with
altruistic reasons in mind.

Ironically, yep. Though as we see some damage was done.

suffered tremendous beatings for it when he was inevitably splashed with

hot

water). Genma had no doubts it would only get worse unless the boy

settled

down soon. Which was why Genma was so desperate to make the plan work,

and

so concerned Ranma would blow such a golden opportunity.

Well Ranma is remarkably thick-headed. If told that it would be impossible
to bash his way through a wall with his head, he'd likely crack his skull
trying to prove you wrong.

Depends on the situation.

"You seem distracted, Saotome."

Genma turned to his companion. "Just considering matters. By the way,
Tendou, do the girls act overly much like their mother?"

"The sex or the violent tendencies? Yes."

Heh. Aymue was a busy girl.

a

tree limb, allowing him to dangle in mid-air upside down. She then tied

him

off on a peg leftover from the volleyball net they sometimes hung in

back.

Once properly secured, the girls spaced themselves evenly apart around

him,

and drew back their kendo sticks, ignoring the squirming youth's muffled
protests.

I think Kuno would've been able to die happy in Ranma's position.

You'll meet him next chapter. It's a long one. 100k long, and still light on
the lemon (though more lemony than this and with more fanservice) Chapter 3
is where the more standard lemon scenes come into play.

be

the hard way again.

It was always the hard way.

Actually it was always the easy way but that never seemed to work out

quite

right.

Heh.

"No way! I'm only straight. Allow me to demonstrate my heterosexuality."

He

embraced Nabiki and puckered up.

Yup, this one's truly desperate.

He thought it was a golden opportunity.

with all of them balking, he had to think fast before permanent damage

was

done. This was his big chance to get laid. There was no way he would let

it

pass up without a fight. Fortunately, he had 'a plan' to make things go

more

smoothly.

Do not ask for whom the bell tolls, for it tolls for thee Saotome.

Heh.

He looked at the words, and mentally cursed. With all the water Nabiki

had

doused him with, the letters had smeared until they were almost

illegible.

He brought his arm up and squinted at the first word. Something about
flattening them? He made a fist, then realized it was to 'Flatter' them.

When in doubt, grovel.

Nope. Plain flattery will do.

takes her responsibilities seriously, but it does nothing to diminish

your

beauty." Especially her pussy, which he had seen twice already and was

eager

to catch a glimpse of a third time, and under more intimate conditions.

And hopefully without a great deal of pain being inflicted on him
immediately afterwards.

That too.

Ranma felt a surge of pride as she obviously reconsidered her initial
assessment. His plan was working. This was the sort of sheer genius even

his

father could never come up with. He continued on to Akane. "And you are
obviously active and into athletics. You also have one of the nicest

asses

I

have ever seen."

Oops, fell off the target zone there.

Yep. He had the right idea, but needs to refine the technique.

Panicking, Ranma said, "Um, you also have really firm breasts, and

unlike

some guys that have a fixation on big ones, I find them really

appealing,

even if they aren't as big as mine when I'm in my cursed form." He saw

the

effect that had on Kasumi and Nabiki: disapproval and general amusement
respectively.

Strike 2.

Yep. He's pretty much lost the fight this time out.

sizes, unless they are absolutely flat-chested, since I think a woman

should

be shaped like a woman, which all three of you are." He began sweating,

even

his father and Mr. Tendou looked irritated at his comments.

He's hopeless. Ah well, Ukyo and Shampoo might be more amenable.

Nah. This is just his first impression. Nabiki is actually amused, rather
than offended.

Genma nodded his head in agreement, but for different reasons. He could

not

help feeling something was a bit off, and the recriminations about the
marriage were still there. It would definitely be for the best to wait

until

he felt better about the situation.

Genma? Guilty? This is new. Aside from Gendo Ikari, he's one of the more
hated characters in fanfiction.

Not by me. I don't take what he  does as any more serious than what everyone
else does in the series.

thing was for certain in staying with the Tendous.

It was sure going to be an interesting time.

There is a reason why "may you live in interesting times" is a curse and

not

a blessing.

Actually there are two versions. He does get the bad one freqently, though.

Overall, worth quite a few chuckles. It will be interesting to see if it

is

indeed possible to write a long-standing lemon with an actual plot.

Yep. I hope so, at any rate. Second chapter rough draft is complete. Just
want to hear from one more person before posting if I have the time.

Thanks a lot for the intensive comments. They are greatly appreciated.

D.B. Sommer

Regards,
Gary

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