Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Sat, 30 Nov 2002 00:28:13 EST JLee100441@aol.com wrote:
Minako sighed as she boarded the aircraft. Artemis was at her side in a
pet carrier. Her parents had been transferred again. Ironically this time it
was back to England. Of {coarse : course} she had to go with them. It looked as if she
would be finishing her last years of school in the UK. Minako just hoped that
the others could handle everything without her.
Minako started looking for her seat. Her parents were sitting in first
class, while she had been condemned to second. Minako smiled as she found her
seat and noted that it was next to a very handsome boy. Things were starting
to look up.
Most long distance flights have first, business, and coach classes, no
second class.
"Minako! Don't you d..."(SLAM!)
Poor Artemis.
They must {of : have} asked a hundred questions about him. Who do you think he
was? What was his manner of speech? Did he have an accent? How was he
dressed? All this and more was asked. Ranma could only answer about half the
questions, but his mother had assured him that it was all right. They then
had him describe the doctor to a sketch artist. While Ranma described the man
in every detail he could remember, Nodoka, her father, and Bond slipped out
to talk in private.
"Oh that's good." Said Minako. She didn't want a possible child abuser as
a father in law. She then saw the pained look on Ranma's face. "I-I {guise : guess}.
Umm sorry."
Getting a little ahead of herself worring about in-laws already.
Ranma nodded. "So where's {mom : Mom}?"
"That's not enough. Both Genma and {me : I} must go with Akane. Only together
can we bring Ranma back."
{Thank. You. Kami.} Thought Nabiki. With Nodoka here her family would get
off her back. She changed her mind however when she caught site of Nodoka.
Nabiki had never seen the woman look so serious. Just for a moment she could
have sworn the {women : woman} looked down right hostile. Nodoka then turned to Soun.
"Why umm, no." Said Soun glancing back at a {Panda : panda} shaking its head. "Both
he and Ranma went on a training trip. They left early this morning."
Nabiki may not be the holder of the Tendo honor, but she does seem to have
the family brains.
"Oh well." Said Genma not too concerned. With his wife gone, so was her
katana. "We'll just have to think of someway to {brake : break} the news to Ranma when
we find him."