Skyrocket wrote:

Hey,

And the good times continue. Enjoy!

	Indeed they do.

	I wasn't really able to do a line-by-line on this one, but that's largely 
to two factors. One of them is the formatting, which hurts the eyes of 
an old and ailing man such as myself. ^_^

	The other one is that there are quite a few spelling errors -- looks like 
you use a spellchecker. Also, you have quite a few '?' characters. I 
would suggest saving your work into a .txt format and then copying from 
it to your post.

	With regards to the story itself, reading past all the little '?'s, it 
was enjoyable. I'm curious to see where you take it, so good work.

	Also, sorry for taking so long to reply. ;)

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